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Lazy immortal

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amaturewriter
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not going to lie.the first 2 chps were kinda boring? IDK but they weren't that interesting but as I read on it was dope...I mean a stupid OP MC that hides his power..i like **** like..only problem is that this guy is an idiot..dont do it...keep him cool smart and lazy....add some romance and fluff and if harem keep it small...but do build the romance and dont do some wuxia **** and separate the lovers or the reason they fall in love is because they dude is strong and the chick is hot...build the damn **** or just no romance.. anyway goodluck..its interesting.. **: I cant help but imagine the hamster as the same one from overlord

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zd4zaas
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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