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Reviews of Last Light in the Universe

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Last Light in the Universe

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X237
X237Lv4X237

Robot character with hardly any emotions. Now why the heck would you ever want to read a story with such a character? I'll tell you why! When you throw a little girl into the mix along with several other robots it somehow blends together into an intriguing and amusing novel to read. No seriously it does! And despite the simplicity of well everyone it all feels tangible. very tangible And that only adds to the positives of this story! So if you want an amusing story to read that's relatively simple then look no further! Don't leave. Stay here with the rest of us and continue reading this novel with us. You won't regret it if any of the things I mentioned your interested in.

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q00u
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Obligatory shameless-author 5-star review, as required. This is how I'm spending my vacation. _Should_ be a quick, short story. I have an ending in mind. Of course, most of this is by the seat of my pants, so who knows? But, I dislike stories that don't conclude, so reaching the final chapter is a priority for me. I hope someone enjoys reading it as much as I'm enjoying writing it.

Montans
MontansLv14Montans

Really like this story so far. You created some interesting interactions between the child and the machines. Please continue to write! 😀 Power stone for you!

LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv12LordSputnik

Honest Review Have to admit this one surprises me! (In a good way) The Good: Having an AI character that follows a set of rules can lead to plenty of creativity with using said rules to perform tasks that normally would not be doable within the said rules. Very well written! The Bad: Using the 'In Emergencies Only' is fine to use, but maybe only once or twice. If you use it more than that, it will feel like a cop out. That's really not a bad thing, just more of a warning as I can't really find anything wrong with it! The Neutral: Need... more...

northpoem
northpoemLv13northpoem

I did not expect a story about a lone space station to be this fun and can't wait to read more about it. There are so many ways for the story to develop and i am intressted in how june and ashley wil develop (if june is even possible to develop considering....) and ofcoure the other "characters?". I recommend this stoy for all who wanna have a break of the typical stories and read something diffrent, you won't regret it. Apologies for the crappy english as it is not my main language

_Kaitlin_
_Kaitlin_Lv5_Kaitlin_

I just found this about 3 hours ago I believe. I can’t fully recall the time I had started this or accurately say how long I’ve been reading this actually because I’ve been so into this book so far. It’s super great. I hope the author feels better soon to update... Until then, read on! Enjoy!

northpoem
northpoemLv13northpoem

I really like this story and hope the author writes more of it. The premise is intresting and the author somehow manages to make the machines feel alive even if they speak in robotic tekst. Please continue author

SirHerrington
SirHerringtonLv4SirHerrington

Type your review here. Please write your review as detailed as you can. Your reviews would be very important to the story (at least 140 characters). I love the way the A.I. interact and designate information for storage. It is very similar to languages such as python where additional information can be combined with current information or separate lists can be added.

aceattorney
aceattorneyLv5aceattorney

Did someone say they'd write extra chapters if there were reviews? Mwahahahaha~! More! Write more! I didn't say you could stop! For real though, I want to see where it goes.

Kaiser_Wilheim
Kaiser_WilheimLv3Kaiser_Wilheim

Extremely impressed with this one! Not much content yet but it is already in my library and I hope it continues after the contest is over. I feel like I can hear CL4P-TP talking in the background in this one.

Holger_Thieme
Holger_ThiemeLv14Holger_Thieme

THE most promising story on the entire platform. I just hope the author is still alive and can continue it anytime soon... Neen waiting for ages now for any life sign...

Yggdrasil_
Yggdrasil_Lv1Yggdrasil_

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Shruti0909
Shruti0909Lv1Shruti0909

Hello! While the characters were built and developed in a classy way, your plot was unconventional. I am really interested in your work. I would love to connect with you and talk about opportunities with financial benefits as well. Drop me a mail if interested!

Zahred
ZahredLv2Zahred

An interesting world and a book for me, because I am sure it is screwed up, can someone recommend a book with a similar background? (The last A.I., or the ruins of some country that is awakening / rebuilding)

Dnieperdnieper
DnieperdnieperLv2Dnieperdnieper

Reveal spoiler

7white_wolf7
7white_wolf7Lv127white_wolf7

Very interesting and maintains possibilities that are intriguing! I really wonder how the story will develop, as it seems that anything from robot overlords like skynet and human pirates could jump out at any moment.

Kenlinvert1
Kenlinvert1Lv1Kenlinvert1

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soulla
soullaLv1soulla

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Holger_Thieme
Holger_ThiemeLv14Holger_Thieme

The story is very promising, but also very short. Id like to see more of it. However, its been a while since the last update. I kinda wanna know how the story goes from here on out.