Jake_Aroling
I've never read Harry Potter, only seen the films. But I must say I quite enjoy the series and it was a delight reading your series and finding much of the elements that made Harry Potter so great, in here as well. The writing is very good, the plot is also great and it makes you interested in continuing reading for hours
I appreciate yours efforts in trying to re create the world of harry potter with a comedic touch. But I think you should really consider the names, again though you made them easier for us readers, sometimes it gets too heard to read. Maybe a small edits here and there. That would be enough!!! Good Work!!!!
As promised, I leave my review here. Please take a look at my book. First of all, I read a few chapters and some things caught my attention. The grammar was very good, I had no difficulty in understanding it, but I want to say that the chapters are very long. I was bored at some points while reading. You can shorten the chapters a little more and make them into multiple chapters. Other than that, your book is fine. I like it.