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Reviews of Larry Bottem and the Sorcerer's Scone

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Larry Bottem and the Sorcerer's Scone

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Limpin_Technocat
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Totally awesome! :D I remember every Harry potter book by heart so I could follow the story well. You did a great job on this novel! Look forward to seeing how high you'll soar:D

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Wolfgirl1215
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Boy did I have a good laugh reading this. As someone who read the harry potter books a lot in my younger years, reading this was hilarious. I love the slap-stick comedy elements, and how surprisingly well thought out it is! Author, you are a genius

jack_Lingscheit
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Reveal spoiler

Jake_Aroling_3754
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This is the most beautiful, high-brow, wonderfully crafted satire piece that has ever been created by man. There is no beating this work of genius.

jimmy_123235256234
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I can't believe the amazing work I just read. This is the most wonderful and great thing that anyone could ever possibly make. Every word is perfectly placed.

Wes_And_Russ
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Okay, I think everyone can agree that this is the best parody ever made. It's just so great! If you read it side by side, you can really see what the author was trying to do with the text! Five stars!

Nicolas_Cavalieri
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I've never read Harry Potter, only seen the films. But I must say I quite enjoy the series and it was a delight reading your series and finding much of the elements that made Harry Potter so great, in here as well. The writing is very good, the plot is also great and it makes you interested in continuing reading for hours

CeliaNaya
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Actually i couldn't stop to laugh :D harry potter is very fresh for me like i m reading it to my 2 sons and they love it :) so i m gonna follow your novel like it is so fun to read it :) thanks for that and i wish you lot of luck for the future :)

Rabbitdreamss
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Love the Harry Potter element, it adds spice to this story. I can't wait for more updates on this amazing piece. You did a great job with the pace of the story development even though it only has 8 chapters.

goldenchild725
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It was quite amusing. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I didn't have Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (or Sorcerer's Stone) on me while I read, I do feel the need to go back and read it all again with the book. Thank you for making me laugh.

A_lucid_Dreamer
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I normally don’t do Fanfic but this Does a great job for the sorces material. Im impressed on how well it is writtin does feel amateur at all 👏🏿👏🏿 i Will recommend This novel

kpthe1
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I appreciate yours efforts in trying to re create the world of harry potter with a comedic touch. But I think you should really consider the names, again though you made them easier for us readers, sometimes it gets too heard to read. Maybe a small edits here and there. That would be enough!!! Good Work!!!!

Bunny_Junnie
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Sounds interesting! Your description skill is awesome and I really enjoyed it. It's easy to understand and smooth to read. You have talent on writing! Keep it up! I appreciate it!

Khawla_Amini
Khawla_AminiLv2Khawla_Amini

The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍

Shaele
ShaeleLv15Shaele

A very interesting and fun-to-read satire. Amidst the sea of countless novels based on the same ideas, it is quite a refreshing read. Well done!

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

This book was so awesome! I am lit just with the title! It definitely has a good quality on it. I almost felt nostalgic when I read it with Harry Potter. Overall a good reading experience and a recommended one for me!

Kronos661
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As promised, I leave my review here. Please take a look at my book. First of all, I read a few chapters and some things caught my attention. The grammar was very good, I had no difficulty in understanding it, but I want to say that the chapters are very long. I was bored at some points while reading. You can shorten the chapters a little more and make them into multiple chapters. Other than that, your book is fine. I like it.