Beginning

hello this is the second time I write a novel my first novel was only one chapter so as much to say I have no experience I am bad in English and I use google translation then rectify as I can So each time I Will publish two chapters an english and a french I hope that this new novel will not end as the first because I like the beginning ah and feel free to comment and note if you like because I I will base myself on this first chapter to know if I continue or not thanks.