Ye Qiaomu
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Ye Shenggeβs character is weak. Sheβs been harrassed and embarrassed for so many times but she still held on as a pushover. In spite of the evidences and realizations that her fiance cheated on her, the excuse of not retaliating is quite lame. She cannot even stand up against her own relatives who are cheating her of her inheritance. Insisting on having a sexual relationship with the Male Lead as cure of her birthmark is actually absurd and unconvincingly feeble to reckon. The only thing that twists the story and makes one look forward to the next chapters is the side of Yi Shiting. Your excitement will rise to know about his family, the woman he was previously engaged, and as to the reason why he has this abnormalities towards women and sex. All in all, the story is ok. Itβs not so emotionally heavy. Thereβs comedy, too. But the plot is not really highly anticipating. There are also errors in the names, perhaps an Editor can help.
This novel is a dissappointment. The FL is so weak, this kind of character should never be an FL. Not once did she fought for her love, she doesn't match the ML. The only reason why i keep reading this because of the ML so decisive, domineering and knows what he wants and how to get it while the FL is so frustrating that i just want to nag this stupid author!! A simple problem that can be solve by simply talking with each other making it a hundred chapter??!! really?!! that just plain stupid!! because the FL is stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and selfish!!!!!!!!! i suggest you don't read this its a waste of time.
Honestly the most idiotic and infuriating FL Iβve ever come across on webnovel. She started off smart and rational, but maybe the drug she took also took away her IQ and EQ cause i cannot fathom how someone this dumb and wishy-washy has the ability to survive. Frankly, itβs an insult to the villainsβ IQ to have to stoop to the FL level of stupidity and be defeated by her.
the story feels more like a ramble than narration ...i am surprised ppl even gave 5 stars for it. the relationship between them is illogical and the fights too. in some books the female lead is portrayed to be dense but then she gets it right after a few chapters this female lead doesn't, even after 200 plus chapters it's not frustrating but irritating ....
1st of all, having a FL that doesn't need rebirth to stand up for herself is really refreshing, as well as her character, silly but not dumb, stubborn but not annoying, flawed but human, it really captures the essence of anyone with insecurities that strive for something better, the ML is cunning, loving, cute and funny, although serious he's not a block of ice with face paralysis, he's domineering but not irracional, and you can tell he has the FL at heart at all times, really worth reading the story is fast paced, romantic, tear jerking, funny and mysterious, has a cool balance and very unexpected twists. Grammar is a miss at times but nothing other than the he/she mixup.
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