KingOfDragons
I love this novel, it may not be perfect in the grammer department but so far its unique flare more than makes up for any mistakes. Its early days for this piece but I can really see it going somewhere and I hope to see it at the top, I would definitley recomend anyone reading this to give it a try.
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Hey friends! This is my first ever novel and it is something I am doing for fun. I am so excited to share it with you and hope you will enjoy it. I know I have a lot of work to do as an author but I will work hard to improve. Please leave a review and comment if you enjoyed. Also have wonderful day and immerse yourself in Kanes journey to emperor of the world!
WARNING I DIDN'T SEE ALL THE CHAPTERS BUT I WILL EVALUATE THIS STORY FROM THE FEW CHAPTERS THAT I READ AND THE SYNOPSIS....... Your typical world conquer,harem story(WHICH IS KIND OF ANNOYING....WELL...NO...SO ANNOYING----my opinion) -grammar-nice (I myself not so good in english but hey that doesn't mean that I'm too bad to not even notice if the grammar was horrible or just understandable) Well everything else is..... at least for me....
It depends too much on the system, every doubt that the consultation has with it, it does not think anything by itself; it would have been better if he got some things on his own instead of the system; Regarding the mask, is he going to sleep with it, he really thinks it's cool, that would be fine if it were ugly but it's not, it's unnecessary to look good if you're going to hide it, it's just a sad excuse for hide your identity like all cliché; I can stand the mask thing but since it communicates with the system it makes me cringe. I admit that I only read a few chapters so I don't know how it evolves and I'm not interested.
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