David_Tieku
There isn't anything particularly good or bad about this novel from what I have read. It's slow, the chapters are short, and not much happens in them. Plus it has the cliche vitriol from one note villains and the subsequent face slaps that occur. I can't speak for future arcs, but in the first arc which deals with archery there is very little depth given to training, technique, muscle gain and so on. Character wise there isn't much to say either. None of them in the 29 chapters I read had any depth nor did any of them have much in the way of a unique personality.
I really like the story so far and I adore Tang Yan - I think as a main character he's not bad (at the very least he doesn't annoy me so that's a plus) and I'm glad that he doesn't stay only in one sport (archery) but also boxing. However for some reason, this is just my personal opinion - I feel like I can feel more intensity when he did archery compared to boxing, which is rather weird considering I've read tons of martial arts manga meanwhile archery is a completely new realm for me. Just a suggestion for author-san, I think you should try to consider expanding the "boxing area" to mixed martial arts esp. with the fact that Tang Yan gained the ability of Bruce Lee. I think it'd be pretty cool if he became MMA athlete and then compete with other athletes that have a range of backgrounds (e.g. they used to do karate, or muay thai or jiujitsu or taekwondo it's kinda like Karate Shoukoushi Kohinata Minoru manga if you've ever read it). I just feel it's a shame since boxing is cool without a doubt, but there's a limit to what the players can do and they're not allowed to attack through kicks or using knees or elbows. That's all really. Anyway I can't wait to see Tang Yan doing other sports (based on the story description I think swimming is a pretty cool idea)~
Overall I think this is a great story, perfect for someone who is looking for a sports/system novel.As I came on this novel while looking for a system sports novel. As I progressed to read the story I fell in love with it. This is one of my favorite novels in webnovel.It has good updating stability, great character design, fabulous story design,etc. I recommend trying it out, if you don't like find another novel and please don't post a negative review! Jeez sorry😳 I went on ranting I just love this novel so much so author please do not ever drop this novel! I beg you😫! Thanks for reading my review! From Your Number 1 Fan!(That's the truth!)😊
I hope you read it because it's a little long. This is so great. I love this novel. I searched for other novels about archery. Because long time new episodes are not coming. But yesterday I heard that the author will release a new chapter soon. So I am writing this review to thank. I love this novel so much. And I believe that if you continue, this novel can take 1st place in the sports category. Even higher in the overall ranking. So please don't stop writing this novel. I will support you as long as you keep writing.