Reviews of Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

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the main reason I'm dropping this because the author heavily nerfed Saiyans and qi energy. If you write fanfic please do so without nerfing and underpowering or overpowering characters

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I hope he's similar to Broly from your other fanfiction and I hope he's trying to conquer like Broly did making him a little more lustful would be great to

Calidad de la escritura (3/5); Actualización de estabilidad (3/5); Desarrollo de la historia (2/5); Diseño de personaje (1/5); fondo del mundo (2/5).

is this harem because I even hate the mere word of it so please tell me if this is harem so I can skip it.🙄😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

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It's a really good story. It had sort of time traveling shenanigans, but it doesn't really take much away from the story. The only thing that I dislike a little is that the Mc is super obsessed with returning home, but in the last chapter, when given the opportunity, he chose not to abandon kara and Raven. It shows that he loves his new family more than returning to his universe A lot of the reviews complain about the Mc, but I think it's good. His interactions seemed fun and realistic, plus I enjoyed his pseudo-sibling rivalry he has with hawkgirl (before she got replaced with another version of herself) Excellent Work Author-san.

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The story is alright but him constantly getting knocked out is very irritating and makes the story boring.

Kara's puppy and tells about reincarnation .

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Great story. The story line isn't anything too complex but it is very coherent and has no real weaknesses. Yes, maybe the ending could have been stronger, but overall no unforgivable cringe through all of this. No garbage filler chapters or emotional nonsense chapters. Just a story about fighting, growth and love/friendship.

Why?? Why can't this be more interesting?? The idea was nice but the execution was pore..... It's as if the author insisted to write all the boring stuff and not moving on to the exiting things.

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Bueno que puedo decir hay algo que no me deja seguir con la historia y es el manejo del poder y desarrollo del personaje ya que de buenas primeras ya odiaba a la liga antes de conocerlos y además se vuelve endemoniadamente fuerte muy rápido literal ya en meses era un experto en batallas y llegar a super sayallin como si fuera cualquier cosa.... eso me molestó a lo que goku le tomo batallas de vida o muerte y años de entrenamiento acá se siente como subir una escalera... y hay algo que se siente y es que ya no se siente la tensión en las batallas no hay emoción y entiendo que es un sayallin pero no tenias porque maxearlo muy rápido porque al final tendrás que buscar enemigos multiversales para darle un poco de pelea y al final el fanfic morirá porque se volverá monótono y aburrido....

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This is great! It is very entertaining this adaptation of Saiyan to the DC universe and great use of power levels, training although the MC has little or no social relationship, I also do not understand why add Nick just to kill him. In some moments it becomes desperate since the MC already has the bases for the harem but nothing ever advances, extremely slow, at least it is known that it will be a small harem. In conclusion, very entertaining and recommended[img=recommend][img=update][img=Shocked]