This is my kinda jam! Cool characters, interesting world that makes me curious and coming back for more and even with just 5 chapters (as of writing this review) I can tell you, we got something special here, just keep'em coming!
Even with four chapters, I can say that this story has loads of potential. I like how it's going so far! The main characters are quite interesting so I'm definitely hooked! :D can't wait for more.
Just because I need one more review I will do mine. I hope its not a problem. And of course thanks to everyone who read my book and made a review.:)
It is only four chapters, you cannot tell much from, but at this point, you are doing a good job. Your synopsis was good and got me interested and you storytell well. I like your writing style, it is nice. You set up a god worldbuilding, showing us a new world and hiw things are done there. The only problem is the bit of grammar mistakes. If you look back and reread your story, you can catch the mistakes. Keep up the good work!
Consider this as an early review to show support to the dear author. Its just 3 chapters yet but the writing style is wonderful and the grammar is perfect as well. The author has created an interesting world and characters. This is the type of story where once you read it, you will look forward to every chapter. At the moment I rate it as 4./5. Waiting for the story to unfold.
Great story and world with nice characters! The Author has a great description about the conversations and in the beginning with the fighting scenes. It has really good potential so keep up!
I like, just like the other one! I hope it will continue more and the Author won't stop the writing, because it has great potential. Good Job!
It has a really good flow and English vocabulary. It has a hooking feeling that makes reader's like to read more, but because there is only 3 chaps I can say only this. Put up the good work!
the story development is so good and the vocabulary is very nice...prologue is explained clearly... Looking for more updates... keep up the good work author
The story and english really flows very well. The start is pretty good and the beginning story arc we are already introduced to the world and the guardians. Is the MC guardian/ stone unique? It can shape change it seems. The title of the story is a Y instead of a J. Is it intentionally?
A very interesting story, The story had a very intriguing prologue and is written well. The character of the MC and other side characters are described well. There are minor grammatical errors, but nothing that will prevent you from the smooth experience of a great read. The world seems very interesting, and there is definitely a hook factor. As there are only 3 chapters so far, I can not comment on the other aspects, but it has got great potential. Well done!
Honestly a good read eventhough it's not my cup of tea I'm still willing to see where it goes.////////////////////////////////////////////////
Author why are not posting any chapters. Am waiting for months for new chapter . Do post it as fast as possible . Pls don't drop it............
great book unexpected turns and really like the story so far and really like the other novel as well. and a question is will he have the lighting ability as well.
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same opinion as always! Amazing book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........................!!!!!!!!!!!..!.!.!.!.!.!.!..!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!..!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!
Addicted to this book! Please continue to write, cause it's amazing! A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!