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I am waiting your supports on my first book. I have many book ideas as well, However I will finish this long-winded project of mine. we have really likeable final. We have immersive story. Well, it consists of magic, cultivation, dao, science. Many of readers likes things from each other. how come all in one? well, I stayed by logic of course. Everything in this journey is answered. so there you go! Love you guys, Thanks for supports Hey, we have more than one MC, so female and male leads as well. dont get confused at the beginnig. I will not describe a lot the people whom is not important for story, because I DONT NEED FILLER CHAPTERS.. My story has huge concept enough. I will not explain the same things twice, but the novel will be long so if I did, just ignore and forgive me. Enjoy it!
The introductory of each character was perfect, first off. Secondly, details of the characters, place, and the description of what they did was on point. I was invested in the first three chapters and I extremely satisfy the way each character has their own light to be introduced. You manage to grab my attention now. To the library the book is. βΊππ
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The story is pretty well-knit, the characters were introduced appropriately while the author took his time to build the world. The plot is interesting to explore There are minor sentence structure mistakes, here and there otherwise it is a polished piece of work. P.S. Author San could you work on the synopsis a little more, it would get you more readers that way. So far, it is still good.[img=recommend]