Reviews of Jaded & other romances
Jaded & other romances
MistressUnderworld
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The book was great! I especially liked the way you started your intro not like most authors do "My name is [blank]. I have [blank] hair, [blank] eyes, my height is [blank] I'm wearing [pretty dang long blank], and [insert some trait that makes MC 'not like other girls' - good job for not doing that 'not like other girls' thing, Keep writing!!
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I have actually read a few chapters from the other story that the writer is writing too. But decides to review this story here. The story will surely meet expectations and the readers can easily immerse into it. I am actually quite surprise that the writer's english is really good. At least I am really impressed by it. So much better than mine! This story seems to be using 'dialogue' while the other story is using "dialogue". At least that is for the earlier chapters. It will be perfect if the dialogue can be updated to "dialogue" for better reading so that I won't misread it as a thought;)
Typically, I do not read romance stories. However, this author has really grabbed my attention with this story. (No Spoilers) If you like the fun banter that goes on between siblings and friends, and a romance story that steps out of the ordinary- I highly recommend this story! I am officially hooked!