its a dropped book 拼烟小军

Your writing Quality is good, made from your very own imagination. Every time I read, I can picture it out clearly. I gave you 5 stars, I hope you will still release updates from here onwards.

i like the way you describe the world the first chapter was a little short for me. however i enjoyed reading it but there a few things i need to point out i am not the best editor. Tips Some of the sentence was a bit short i felt like it could have been long also watch out where your are placing your commas. Other then that i think you did a good job well done

Hi. I liked It so far, and I think the author has terrific writing skills. The world described in the novel seems vivid, and impacts the events. It's good. I've got a bit confused, however, with choice of narrative style. It has screenplay elements here and there. It's not a problem, it just stands out. The other point is, sometimes the MC, mainly in the 3 First chapters, lacks emotion. But it gets better as the story goes on. Overall, an interesting book, an interesting narrative. Will keep following for sure.

I actually read Aristocratic heels and quite liked it although I am not into erotica. Hoping the sensual scenes will be a bit different in this one. But hey, another book in my library, that's a gain. I'm bad at constructive criticism, so all I can give you is my support and encouragement. Good luck, author!

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The author paints a pretty picture with her words. The reader can clearly visualize the beautiful world she's bringing to life on the page. There are a few grammatical errors that really need fixing to make the backgrounds and dialogue pop out more but it is easily an understandable work that deserves praise. The protagonist herself feels like an ugly duckling who will eventually become the belle of the ball, so to speak. The way people of the kingdom treat her like the plague irritates me so much that I'm ready to laugh in their faces when she does become the chosen one or the most beautiful one out there. I am interested to see how this comes about as I've only finished the first few chapters. Looking forward to more enjoyment reading this story! Cheers.

The story has a good start and an entertaining plot. The grammar is fine. I have kept it in my library to continue reading it, it has caught my attention 😀 (explicitid sneces😏) XD

Very nice book, this will definitely get exposure soon. I like it as it fits my needs personally🤣 magic, royalty, helplessness and mystery. Love it!!! Keep working hard Aysel!! Good luckkk

Writing another review here. I really appreciate the way story is going with the highly fantastical world building. I would love to see Charis surviving throughout but I'm still curious about male MC. The king is already married so who is the hero ? Moreover to wait for update for three days is too much for how exciting the story is.

To understand and get into the grammar it takes a moment to process but when you have processed it. It's actually really nicely written and the flow is really good and it feels like you are reading it in a poem form more than in a regular novel form. The world background really goes well with the story and the flow in the story really is nice and I'm waiting for more chapter's as I want to see more of that background. Same with the character development it really is interesting and well made for the story and you really can see that they have given time and thoughts to create the world and characters in it. So give it a try and I think you won't he disappointed at all.

Appreciable effort and worth reading message of beauty. I highly recommend this for reading a new thing about Fantasy. Moreover the grammatical usage is infused with poetry is a new thing to read.♥️

Great reading this story because of the different and amazing stuff that lies within. Beautiful imagery and loved the concept of Goblin girl trapping into the kingdom of humans with magic. It is a worth reading presentation on the rotten morals, manifesting the reality of today. The author is having another story "Strange Bosses", a billionaire romance compilation which is also quite good and fast paced .

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Dear author, when will hero meet our Charis?😭 Why are torturing your readers like this? I'm so so in love with this story, every three chapters will bring readers to new things. The most outstanding factor of this story is it's strong world background and fully developed characters even if they are side ones.

I have read author's other work "La Serpiente" and it was a very interesting story. Stating this one it's just mind blowing and expertly written. The flow of scenes, vocabulary usage is very high and sentence structures are like written by a pro. Everything is very detailed let alone the major plotline which is just "WHOA!" In simple words.

Must read this book❤ I can only say it contains many messages hidden within this wonderful narration. It has the concept of true beauty as the title states the whole thing. All the characters are stuck into their own illusions regarding beauty. Just read it and it won't disappoint you in anyway. ❤😍

A whole new fantasy to read, quite different from the ones that only state fairies and slayers. It's set into a reign with kings and queens but the concept of goblin as a FL is very interesting thing. To make such an odd mythical creature lead is a great step.❤