Issei's Redemption

Hello This story is great. and for those who like .Author : Some_Writer. Storys. the next one will be DB story. and i promise lots of pics just like this one with Bulma.

I'm bad at reviewing but I'm gonna say good job at making this fanfic. There's too many Issei bashing fic I had to read nowadays that I really getting tired of reading until one of this came along. Anyway, Issei is now more developed as a character and I like about writing him differently than the usual cliche stories of betrayals and bashing these days. I'm also glad that you regularly update the story. Although, was hoping you could give us a bit of warning of the lemons as I kept walk into em without warning.

Hey Author-kun do not take my comments personal ok. I still love your storys and i can not wait for your other storys. And i wanted to suggest you to do another voting for your next story. Because after some thinking i must aggre with you thare is way to many Naruto FF already. DB FF with Smarter Goku is way to little. So.? what you think.? And again i love your writing im juat irked with last chapters thats all.

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This is a great book and I like what you did with the characters. Keep up the great work author and its unlikely but if you can find a way to add Grayfia and Venelana to the harem that would be great!

Saya menyukainya, terus semangat Mimin👍👍😉 ................................ ................................. ................................... ..................................... .......................................

Keep up the good work with constant updates and adding new things and imma stay its a good take on all of the issei fanfics I’ve read and I feel is just about to take off too

Issei in this story is truly great character. POWER STONE FOR YOU.AUTHOR-KUN. And i have one more advice towards your Naruto story. It is abaut Sakura. Do not let Naruto take her toxic behevior. The only reason he did it in original story is because he did not have any social skills.It is obvius someone who have them would not take her BS and will not ignore it how Naruto did . Im not saying you should bash her or anything. Maybe only a little bit on the beggining so she see error of her ways. Im sure you know her character and why fandom hates her.

I love your storys and i want to give you a advice. If you going to have Master Gyatsu help Naruto during his Academy days first thing he should help Naruto with is his total lack of social skills and chakra control. Im sure you have good idea how they will meet the first time. Maybe when Naruto is 9 years old.? It will be araund 2 years in Academy already and 3 years before CANON starts. And another thing. Do not make the same mistake Masashi Kishimoto did when it comes to Sakura and Naruto during his Academy days and Genin Days.

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This a very good novel. I hope you will try to write a naruto novel next

I love this story. Heh Issei trashed everyone.

The story is not very good in terms of the plot and the description of the character's actions, the scenes of emotions and romance seem forced and unrealistic, the main character, although better than the original, is by a maximum of 20-30%, he is the same pervert, only stronger, the writing quality is normal, fic to me I did not like it, I wish the author good luck

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Easy top 5 in my library. One of the best dxd books I’v read. And the best part a realistic PP size

Keep going

Vali and Albion vs Issei and Draig. Battle of Rivalry Begins.!!!

Hmm I like it, it is like that one type of food you can always eat. I have been reading fanfiction for 4+ years and this type of light hearted novel is sometimes all you need.

Reveal spoiler

C'est une histoire géniale le personnage principal évolue avec le temps et les mise-à-jour son régulière et on vois que l'auteur et impliqué dans son histoire et que il fait de son mieux pour que cette histoire soi original