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Isekai : Cheat Internet connection

Si_Koplak

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Si_Koplak
Si_KoplakAuthorSi_Koplak

Thank you for reading this novel, there are still many shortcomings in terms of writing, especially in English. Sorry, in the future I will correct any mistakes in writing. πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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WanderingImmortal_
WanderingImmortal_Lv14WanderingImmortal_

I'm sorry, i tried. i really tried. but i can't anymore, it was so confusing for me. if ever try using your language then find someone who can translate this to english or just let someone proofread your english. this may help you a lot from publishing better chapters and also learning english a bit more.

Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4Gojusensi_441

U have to write more clearly cause I can focus sometimes but overall it's plot is good but just improve your writing capabilities I know it's hard but try using grameely u can avoid gramer mistakes

Bilal_Kaplan
Bilal_KaplanLv1Bilal_Kaplan

Reveal spoiler

PhantomMedjay
PhantomMedjayLv11PhantomMedjay

Dont know what is happening with the broken grammar. Sorry but till you edit your work, I cannot continue reading. Great idea with the story, just needs a better quality finish of your work.

LuciferBloodfallen
LuciferBloodfallenLv2LuciferBloodfallen

this book i great I would have given more rating but the sentences are a bit.... However don't be disappointed correct your writing a bit more and the story will shine. I liked the story overall just make sure u write more clearly maybe get a editor who is good in English

Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyLv12Little_Foxxy

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

Fenrirzero9999
Fenrirzero9999Lv13Fenrirzero9999

A great novel [img=exp]. [img=exp][img=exp] good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

ReaderLove
ReaderLoveLv13ReaderLove

This novel has more flaws than that one fantic novel with 1000 chapter and I thought that was bad but this is just worse. The whole structure of the writing need to be fixed before people can enjoy the plot of the novel.

doppleganger
dopplegangerLv5doppleganger

Sorry author. I have to stop reading this novel. I can't understand it at all even it's written in English. Try to find someone else to proofread your work.

Cewu
CewuLv14Cewu

the story seems like it could be something... but dangggg is the grammar horrible. It is not just grammar but overall sentence structure and meaning. Sry author but this is horrible. I hope you can find someone to edit this.

kingdomkings
kingdomkingsLv15kingdomkings

you have a good idea and a great background but you need more writing experience you are all over the place with your writing and I get lost sometimes reading

Hsaet_Uchiha
Hsaet_UchihaLv4Hsaet_Uchiha

My man, a lot of people already told you about the grammar so plz try to fix it. You can hired a beta reader.

PumpkinTheif
PumpkinTheifLv2PumpkinTheif

The writing quality needs a little work.

lbis
lbisLv15lbis

This story could be something incredible if this guy had an editor going behind him and correcting his mistakes. Till then i’ve gotta abandon the book. i’ll miss you guys 😒

RXooos
RXooosLv3RXooos

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international_Ss
international_SsLv1international_Ss

It would be a nice read if it was understandable and its kinda cringy no doubt but I still like it if you ignore the frequent grammar and english mistakes.

Nicola_mreno
Nicola_mrenoLv3Nicola_mreno

Tienes que escribir mΓ‘s claramente porque puedo concentrarme a veces, pero en general la trama es buena, pero solo mejora tus capacidades de escritura. SΓ© que es difΓ­cil,

Daoist_Nyanko_Bub
Daoist_Nyanko_BubLv10Daoist_Nyanko_Bub

The concept is good but the writing quality is disappointing. I can't understand especially the conversations of the characters. Hopefully, the author will improve and edit the early chapters. Have a good journey, dear author.

NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14NowGoWithTheFlow

I read around 2 chapters. I had to give up on the book. The reason is I just couldn't understand most of the time. Most sentence didn't make sense and really what is going on?