Hi guys, this is the very first chapter, and I would like to make some things clear. 1- There will be romance? Well, a little, but I'm not a romanticist. Hence, this will take place 'SUPER FU***NG LATE' in the story. So don't worry about Feifei for now. She isn't the main point here, Krune's life as a wisp is. 2- If you haven't noticed the spaceship yet, you better know that this is a novel where technology exists. Still, it is mostly used for convenience. It takes almost no part in the cultivators' strength, so don't expect super mechas or spiritual armors or whatever. Think about this universe as if our nowadays technology meets the ancient cultivation world and they just get well together. It also helps to create a lot of funny events, so... 3- The first 20 chapters or so doesn't picture it well. Still, like a wisp, Krune only has the little knowledge that he learned in the forest and by secretly visiting the nearby villages. He knows about the technological world but had barely involved himself with it before leaving the Katiu Forest. 4- As a nonhuman, Krune has no EQ when considering the humans' culture and habits. It is definitely one of the top trends of this novel, so you can expect a lot of 'smashing my face against the common sense wall' after chapter 20 more or less. 5- Will there be harem in this novel? No, there won't be any, be it Krune or any other character in the entire story. 'Sorry, Mario, but your princess is in another castle.' I'm the type of person that can't accept a world where a man having several wives is okay. Still, a woman having more than one man is considered a betrayal, this is BS! I have no problem with novels where both genres have the same rights, though. 6-The book is now passing through a re-edition. The story won't change anywhere, just the grammar will be fixed. You will notice that the grammar will turn bad at some point, and then it will come back to normal after chapter 100. Thanks to my editor for all the work on the existing chapters so far. o/
Its so cool and original. I love the idea of a wisp cultivator and the best is that its not a reincarnation and the wisp os intelligent. There is no long vjapters about learning that bore you. Just the balance it need to keep it interesting and logical for the plot. Its a must read in a point of view. I just hoping the author will continue. Ps: no harem.
The quality of the writing is over all alright there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be over looked. The stability of the updates is pretty consistent so not much to complain about. The real downfall of this story is the characters and their development, and by development I mean the lack of it. The characters frankly are boring and very 2d most of their personalities can be described with a few words such as, mean and money hungry, talented and ignorant, genius and quiet, and for Ao he has nothing other than being the only other guy in the story. The story development is also very bad it is mostly the same over used jokes and the protagonist getting bullied by his so called friends. The Mc is supposed to be smart but then makes the same mistakes over and over again, and then it is just labeled as a joke. The one thing that makes the Mc unique, other than his race, is almost instantly given to his friends and they are only slightly slower than the "genius" mc. This story had so much potential, and I really enjoyed it at the stat but then the repetition of the same thing made the story get old real quick. As a suggestion to the author pleased do not keep forcing the same jokes, build on the characters more, give something to make the mc unique again, other than his race, allow the mc to grow and learn from his mistakes instead of repeating them. These are just a few things that could be done to improve the over story. Once again I love the concept of the story and the beginning was great, it just never let the characters to be built cause it to get boring really quickly.
I cannot stand so many characters in this novel. It's one thing to have a gag, it's another for a side character to put MC's life in danger for some cash and still be part of the main cast. I'm done with this novel man. It's got a main character that just gets walked all over the more he interacts with humans. He's powerful but has no weight to his name and one of his comrades treats him like a money making tool. Interesting world, in treating premise, ****ty characters and horrible interactions.
If one's feeling like tempering their soul this soul attack training device should be an average choice. Between the repetitive misuse of language, the killing instincts inducing characters, the anything but consistent power levels, pacing, talents, advancement speeds and numerous other issues in too lazy to comprehensively enumerate there's just not enough to manage to keep me reading on with no concerns for my mental health and wellbeing.
First of all, wait until you read at least five chapters before forming an opinion. The first two chapters are quite small and ordinary, but the story quality gives a super jump (and I mean it) after the third one. The author increased the amount written after the third chapter as well. What really caught my attention is the MC and how the world thinks about the wisp, and I've never seen a wisp MC before. Another excellent point in this story is the MC cheat. This one was very well thought, and really well elaborated.
My main gripe with the story however is grammar, spelling, and phrasing. The first 20 chapters or so weren't terrible, you can definitely read passed them. Minor errors are expected on a platform that you are requires to release a chapter or two a day to be popular. The issue is the latest chapters. They read like a poorly translated novel. If they can be edited to at least the same standard of the previous chapters, I wouldn't have a problem. That being said, I do think this can reach the top ranks of Web Novel given time. The story draws you in quickly even with all it's tropes and deadpan humor. I do think to get their the writer will have to make sure to maintain the standard of the writing they've done so far as well as hopefully going back and fixing grammar issues overtime
This novel is a breath of fresh air in many ways. The grammar’s a ****y bit weaker than some, but that hardly affects the experience. You’ll find that the author, Suiyan, has a fetish for mass releases (don’t think of anything dirty). The story progresses nicely on a slowly quickening rate. From the first few chapters to the latest, you’ll always find tidbits to enhance your knowledge on what the core plot is. Does he have to reach the peak of the world? Save his loved one? Save his race? Extend his life span enough to not die? The answer is: Yes. Like I said, it’s a breath of fresh air, and the same goes for the characters. You don’t have that faultless main character that never does bad, or commits mass genocide and goes “I won’t let the world walk over me” or something of the like. Here, our MC, Krune is genuinely good, not from his character description, but rather his actions. While he comes of as a little wimpy, character development that sees him taking on new, and the cliched shameless trait exist. But, this only enhances the comedy, ‘cause the Novel is easily top three in comedy. The side characters, while kinda generic at the beginning, diversify in their characters later on. This, also, is a plus. For world background, you have a literal multiverse and a higher realm, but the plot never feels like it’s larger than its current setting. To me, that would mean that if he’s in a village, you could get knowledge on the cities, but the readers don’t immediately focus on what happens after he leaves the village, but rather the village itself. I’m not entirely sure what constitutes an amazing background, but I think it’s good enough if it’s there and doesn’t overshadow the foreground before it’s the main focus. Nonetheless, the world is expansive with the author not only expanding on it based on size/location but also based on how the people’s views change in the different parts. Or at the very least confirming that it won’t just be a cliche “go to city, go to competition, go to school, offend big guy run away, find something useful, repeat steps one to five with a ‘capital state’ rather than ‘city’, goes back to city and floor the big guy before we forget about him.” Krune is not the type that lets conflict dictate his worldview. All in all, it’s a great, kinda lighthearted read. I love it. Hope you try it if you’re reading this.
This book was a big surprise for me. The world development includes multiple universes and we learn about it as the mc does. And the story follows a wisp (obviously). But as he quickly grows stronger and learns about his surroundings we see this personality that is more kind than usually found in a book about cultivation. And this genus will have you laughing as he tries to avoid standing out.
Okay suiyan I am a silent reader but I would like to say somethings. At the beginning of this book I thought it wasn't gonna be interesting but with time and patience the book has improved, you have improved and that is how a writer should progress so I encourage you to keep it up and continue being one of the best.