is love real

hi, I. the creator of this story, as you can see its not much, this is my first story and its basted of my life or what I think my life would look like if I had a few changes, there are good and bad things like bulling dating and the repercussions of it, trama, family, friends highschool and ect. the people I had read this told me that at some parts it moves kinda fast and others it moves kinda slow, once again please help in no professional writter, there's a lot wrong with it, im asking you, reader to help me fine tune it, much appreciated Dani (rose). some of the characters in this book are based off of real people I'm not allowed to disclose all of the names of the real-world counterparts but there are a few for example the real world counterpart to candy is my little brother James, yes I do know candy is a girls name but that's how I see my little brother as a helpless baby and I'm so sorry but like Rosetta, I will protect him to keep him the same, if I can, and the with "mom" is my mom as in the stlife, my mom doesn't always get the appreciation that she deserves, now I've been making the story since I was about 14 or 15 so in the beginning the dynamic is kind of sloppy but as I get through just worse the thing it gets better cuz I had to do this on my school's laptop for the longest time because my phone I didn't get in till my mid junior year of high school oh, now that I've graduated I want a little bit of extra help so I can keep going with this Hobby, I also have a few other stories I've been working on long with the story eventually I will get them put out there for you guys to read but once again thank you for at least reading all I want is at least be seen I'm more than capable of my hometown and family and try to make a difference in somebody's life, not just my own