Reviews of Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in SAO?

Great SAO fanfic with a unique MC with his narcissism (which is a lot, but has the reason for it)...the MC is much better than most of the hypocritical MC's in the other fanfic who use their knowledge to just save female leads and make them love him but rather do it with pure intentions to help them... although he is narcissistic, he isn't an asshole...it might take some time to adapt to his personality, but it is a good fanfic and a change of pace from other fanfics...

Finally, an SAO fanfic that has some stability in updating! Although, it would have been nice if his narcissistic tendencies were toned down a little. He just talks about how pretty he is and how handsome he is at almost every given time! Although it is quite funny, it gets annoying very quickly. And hey, is that mage job picked so he can use it at ALO? I would've thought that he'll pick up the beginner swordsman since he would go to SAO first.

I have 2 problems with this fanfic. 1-The protagonist’s narcissism is annoying. Some people like exagerrated flaws or quirks, then it’s good for you. 2-The guy chose to go to SAO world, a world with no magic, no supernatural. And the first job he choose is beginner mage. It would have been better to get Beginner Esper (telekinesy > electrokinesis, empathy > telepathy), much more compatible with a technological world.

. . . . . . . . . . . Apologies for this shameless review, but as I know myself, I know this novel is great! Enjoy reading it, as it is definitely worth 5 stars!

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Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? 😀 love it 😍

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Good story, but the mc is a big turn off I stopped reading it purely out of the fact that the only thing he talks about is how good looking he is

Don’t be ridiculous, of COURSE I want to go to Death Mage! The sheer excitement would be worth the trouble! You couldn’t stop me from jumping on that doomed ship!

Plz dont drop keep writing thank you.

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espero que finalmente salga la reecritura de esta historia, por que me muero por ver como sera de diferente con respecto a la original, asi como desarrollaras las relaciones de MC con las chicas de su harem

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I feel that this book has had a very good start so far and I will continue to read in the future although I think you should speed up some of the development I am currently very satisfied so far continue the good work.

The only thing that discourages me in its history is this extremely narcissistic personality, I have lost count of how many times I wanted to give up reading only between caps 1 to 6 because of this narcissistic personality. Having a main character with an exaggerated trait is not a problem, the most famous shonen presonations are like this, but you have chosen one that is unbearable. Imagine you having a boyfriend (girlfriend) or friend who every time he talks to you keeps talking about how handsome or perfect he is, it's just annoying !!