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Author!! It's like reading a story written by a 5 year old.. Grammarly is free why not try using it? don't make an excuse that English is not your primary language

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Expect To be a good thing to do in the future and I hope you have a great day and I will see you soon and hope you have a great day and I will see you soon and hope you have a great day and I will see you soon and hope you have a great day and I will see you soon and hope you have a great day and I will see you soon and hope you have a great day and I will see you

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Good concept, make sure that shiva is the main wife ah!!! Also I hope you keep the harem to the elite girls only, otherwise there will just be too many girls he’d be picking up

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interesting

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The grammar was readable, it was better than some of espanola that mess up vocab setting. So... Yeah its interesting, im waiting for more..

Well the English is a bit broken, but its still written well enough to understand what's going on. the story is going at a decent pace as well. Keep up the good work

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The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem

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Indian guy trying to stick his god in a really good story and trash it ... not a fan, not reading anymore... I think the reviews are so misleading and tricky that its probably not real. this is my review I don't have anything against the author but this story is bad, I usually hate people trying to stick their stuff in every novel, there is the fanfics that I saw and wanted to read and found it translated on deadlynovels which is an indian translator "btw, I hate you deadlynovels guy" he turns names and stuff indian so the guy (mc) named raj and fml lead is some other indian name it broke the soul of the story... back to this, this too brake the soul of the story... you write about a story of greek gods so keep them greek, the mc name should play well with the feel of the original story, and pls no crazy fast love scenes if you r writing a smut say that in the description

REALLY GOOD SAD THAT IT DROPPED OR HIATUS...EXP..................................................................................................................................