Reviews of Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?
Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?
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Wow, i really got in the story despite the lack of chapters. It happens very rarely due to the poor quality of the content in web novel, but we canβt be picky can we now ? Anyway, This concept is interesting, the grammar flawless, the main character already endearing and not some fool chasing an stollen ideal he has no reason to believe in despite him being a honour-bound knight who believes in goodness of hearth. He doesnβt look undead either if it drive you off, all in all the character is cool, the story is cool, and Bell coming a squire makes him less annoying somehow ? Before i forget, Ais best girl !
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I really like the story. The idea of knight from Dark Souls is interesting and fresh, you didn't make him op but strong enought to hold his ground and still have the potential to grow I especially like his character that reminds me of kind uncle and of course knight, you really nailed his thoughts and overall actions in way witch really well captures what we should expect of him. Another thing is your story witch although is only starting is already looking interesting. I just hope you won't drop it and stop updating.
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Well I won't turn you away from reading this, matter of fact this is a good novel on the site. Mc is pretty op, Which is nice. From what I've read I think the big baddie wont just be a danmachi character. I feel the Mc is a bit careless with sharing information about himself, but that's just opinion. Factually of course is the top-shelf spelling and grammar this story has. There is no need to worry about the story seeing that it's solid and has direction.
I love tHe story i have said this many times and i know being to Strong is boring but i hope its not he is way behind bell i dont like bell he is a cool lIttle dude but as a fanFiC the mc should take the cake The old mc can be pwoerful and sand side by side but necer over shadow the mc you made but i love the fanfic fr π¦Ύ
