Lacrima_de_Sal
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
This novel β€οΈπβ€οΈ. And a great way you write it Make me look forward to more Chapter's . I hope you don't stop this novel plz keep the good work in it & Make it better than ever. & Also don't Listen to Negative opinion to much Just take the Useful one from it and leave the rest. Best ragrds & have good day .βΊοΈπ
This story had a lot of yummy potential cant wait for more β€οΈ β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
All of the reviews are lying about the writing quality because while it isn't the worse I've seen, It definitely isn't enough to give it 5 stars. It wouldn't have been enough to put me off, the fact there is little to no punctuation, but the sentences just do not flow so I had to stop reading. Everything else is okay, the stability is twice a month, the story development is slow but reasonable and the character design is decent. All I can say is, I don't know why there aren't more bad reviews.
The story has a good potential. Keep up the good work author!ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππππππππππ
the protagonist's development during the story so far has been well developed, the way you present her emotions and how she acts realistically made me really like the story. The only point that left something to be desired in the story is the grammar but as the chapters go by is be able to see the improvement