Reviews of Invincible's Kryptonian Twin

I.... dont understand this fanfic it's not like it's bad but..... I just don't understand it Mc doesn't know what he wants and why he wants it. Why should he fight for humans in the first place, he has no obligation to it. MC hates his dad for no apparent reason, he didn't even consider whether it was an AU or not. He said he wanted to show his powers when mark did...... but why? And most of all, MC doesn't have a personality, He doesn't even have a motive

I have seen many negative comments regarding the work and I have a question for you, do you know what a plot development is? clearly they are the type that in the first chapter they want everything to change with respect to the original work, as for my opinion with the novel is that it is very good, it has a very good quality that you find in few novels and a good development in characters and scenarios.

Usually I am rather hard in criticism but there I do not understand those who are. The story is pretty well put together even though it started a little fast at the beginning. Although it doesn't affect the canon at the beginning, the changes it brings little by little are quite coherent (mark's jealousy, the kryptonian in this universe...) Even the love interest was brought with a good explanation.

I just don't understand why this novel has a very low rating. So I rate 5 star cuz I like it so much. I just don't understand why this novel has a very low rating. So I rate 5 star cuz I like it so much. I just don't understand why this novel has a very low rating. So I rate 5 star cuz I like it so much.

Okay, yes this story does follow the general timeline of the show, but it's only a few chapters so far and it's definitely worth the read. It's easy to follow along with and as the Tag suggest you get some Slice of Life mixed with action and all that. Also his Race get's explained as well so that's pretty cool. Anyway, anyone thinking of giving this story a chance I highly suggest you do so. I know the top comment is someone with a super negative opinion but in my opinion it's very wrong. Just give it a chance, I don't think you'll be disappointed. Unless you think like the first comment guy.. then you'll be disappointed lol.

This is a good fanfic. Just don't know why it's rated lowly by others. It's kinda unfair for the author when he spends much time writing this but got criticize unjustly because he isn't coupled with the girl they like. You should just give it a try. It may not be perfect but it's quite good.

i love the story and it's development i hope you don't lose your motivation because of a few bad eggs stay strong and don't give up. And remember people this is a fanfic it won't always follow the original story and if you don't like this story don't read it and insult it because you don't like it.

As long as you have stable quick updates your story will skyrocket to top 5. I hope i see more of you. I’m in with love the story so far. I hope you stick with it.

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My condolences to the authors family. I pray for you. I pray for you. I pray for you. I pray for you. I pray for you. I pray for you.

bien .

it's a great book and I say this has a lot of potential, I hope you go further than where the show left off other than that, good job and can't wait to read more.

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It's decent so far just wish the chapters were posted a lil faster r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r

Es el primer fanfiction del mundo de Invencible que encuentro. Esta genial, lo sigo a full. ____________________________________________________________________________

Super histoire je veux que tu q'on tu nu c est une super histoire vreman vreman trop bien car il le magnifique 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

--------------------------------------------------------------- Muito bom, que Deus conforte a família do autor, fiquei muito triste com a morte do autor. ---------------------------------------------------------------

i like this may the author find peace wherever he goes next in his journey

Lovely... could use some changes and a bit more reread before posting, but shame. I'm gonna make my own