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New Review The novel started off strong but fell a bit, but it's all been redeemed, and now we are in preparation for the final arc. For those who left thinking that the mc was just going to follow rimuru they were greatly mistaken, this world has branched off drastically from canon in a very intriguing way. And for those who thought inspired inventor wouldnt work in this world were also wrong, it made sense that tensura was just too bland and dull of a world that something complex like inspired inventor wouldnt fit in. WRONG. Author has made it fit in quite well, almost perfectly if I do say so myself. Of course the story and plot as a whole may seem shakey at points, but that's it, just shakey, the author manages to steady the foundation every time. Throughought the novel you may seem doubtful at some things, and doubt if things will work out in the end, and luckily for you, if you still kept on reading everything worked out and still is working out. Many people dropped this for the small negative points above, thinking that it would fail, all they needed was to give it a chance, I'm glad I did.
In just about any other isekai setting, an Inspired Inventor antihero would work. Not so in the Tensura world. The overall lighthearted nature of this setting means that the MC's personality does not fit, and she's always forced to either yield to Rimuru whenever they disagree, or actually succeed in turning the setting into a grimdark one. Neither is an enjoyable prospect, and it only results in the MC trying to act all cool and edgy, but only succeeding in being cringeworthy.
I’ll just say that i was excited there was finally a inspired inventor fic, and then you kinda ruined it by nerfing it. you practically just made Him an evergrowing tinker with how you’ve blackboxed his tech so no one else can copy his instructions. which is a bit of a downer when your doing a kingdom building fic.
hate mc ,rimuru always reveal his secret to everyone that can cause them to get killed and mc do noting to rimuru, another issue is mc getting mistaken as female and not single time did he correct worst thing he started to act like as lady like dafuq the author must gay that's why, you should just make him female before he got reincarnated to avoid this genderbend
Alright, this is an amazingly written story thought I do have some discrepancies like how the author got strong handed into changing on of his descions which I hated, and how this is way to fcukcing advanced for my feeble mind to understand oh lord you would not believe the amount of times I had pulled up Google and just googled over and over and over every single chapter a new thing would be introduced and boom in Google it went and I was reading a long as wiki page, then I would give up look at a summary and finally go "Oh, but then how does this fit with the story? And how does this work then.." like with the Maxwell's demon I was totally and utterly lost in its application with the story. 5/5 Writing. 3/5 Story Development and Character Design cause I started to disagree with the characters choices and how it affected the overall story. 5/5 Updating, author has kept up their work daily. 2/5 World Background as I'm including this as the power applications and the different theories that she uses for her weapon and how the majority of the time I had to stop reading and read a wiki page which ruined the flow of the story for me, it was either that or just not understand the story which is stupid.