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I like Chinese cultivation works, but one of the things that bothers me most is that personal strength is always placed as the most important and that is why almost no protagonist strives to create any kingdom or sect, the MC of this fanfic in a way " created "a loyal servant to him instead of cultivating alone, I understand why most cultivation works the protagonist wants to become a God, but what is the grace of becoming a God alone
First off, any Reverend Insanity fanfic must be applauded. Cuz it's unlike any traditional cultivation fic, there are lots of opportunities and paths are possible unlike the usual breaking realms and sitting in a basement/cave. --- Review as of Chp 44 This fic has the premise of a SI into the Gu Yue Clan. SI has read till the Shang Clan arc, Southern Border (~Chp 270+) Overall the plot is consistent and well scripted. SI tries to use all possible ways to strengthen himself and prepare for the future. SI admires FY ruthless perseverance but isn't a boot licker and doesn't team up with him. He isn't a master manipulator but doesn't shy away from embracing difficulty too. As for any cheats/powers it's a basic Gu shop system. Pricing is set appropriately so that higher ranked worms are very hard to get. As for negative aspects etc, I would like to see the SI develop more ruthlessness/betrayal necessary in a cultivation fic đ Since timeline has just completed Vol 1, i.e. Leaving Qing Mao mountain so this part can be developed further. Also I would appreciate more challenges/hurdles. Example is loot/kill clans to gain Gu points cuz the shop system has high demands. Thanks for the story, it's great and I hope you'll continue it in the future. Ciao đ¤
Writing 3/5 - Decent grammar. MC's lines could be better. Chapter length is long enough. Stability of Updates 3/5 - A few updates a month is good enough for me, chapter length is what kept it from being just 2. Story Development 3/5 - A pretty balanced score as I don't know where this is going. Character Design 3/5 - MC is pretty bland and somewhat uncharismatic. His "bullying the strong" doesn't really make any sense in his case and makes him a hypocrite (in my opinion). His condescending attitude is fine, but it's not really entertaining type compared to other (more well-written condescending) MCs. World Background 4/5 - I don't even need to explain this. But, y'know: RI-reverse is the World Background and Gu Zhen Ren (RI author) did a good job writing it. However, it became a 4/5 due to things that weren't explained in enough details. The Total Score 3.8/5 - I don't rate everything 5/5 anymore.
I admit, it's kind of interesting to me... Yeah, he is in sh1t fvck cultivation world where mc evil in human skin... Its good that you didn't nerf the evil inside fangyuan but I really think that he should stop fanboy-ish with fangyuan after he screw you for few times... Yeah, I admire a cold blood, evil mc too.. But it's when I read it.. When it happen to me like mc, I will kill the old demon and if I can extract the rank 6 gu, I will...