Your writing style is great, dear. But I think you might write the story without including games related talks. It doesn't feel well. Write like the game but don't mention its name. And the Hero is too intelligent to predict everything... Thank you, so much... Keep writing. I will be waiting for the next update. I wish you very good luck.
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