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Infinite Gameplay

MikruZero

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MikruZero
MikruZeroAuthorMikruZero

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Phodoodles
PhodoodlesLv1Phodoodles

I'll be honest, but the first initial chapters were a bit of a struggle to read. Maybe because of the grammatical mistakes and misuse on tenses and adverbs. Not to add, I noticed that the author tends to be redundant too. And that made my eyes feel tired. (Imagine reading a paragraph that repeated the word "kill", "left", "walks" 5+ times) Although there was a slight improvement from chapter 13 onwards, I recommend that the author should be vigilant on proofreading and improving on your vocabulary to remedy that. Lore-wise, I like how the author thought about how to make his "system" uniquely his by adding his own touch. I liked the way how he fashioned the quest part especially. The Story & Characters though... is a bit lacklustre. Either that or the pacing was a bit off. Especially when it came to the MC's interaction with the opposite gender. I really saw him as a thirsty dude despite his dialogues were rational sometimes. Also the murdering parts and the implied pinning (well it is a harem) were a little awkward and robotic. I think using realistic references and putting genuine emotions would make those better. Although I pity Kite for being thrown into the fray of the system but still, some parts on his character development may need work since I don't feel that attached to him. (or maybe because I got irked on some of his questionable actions)

GloriouslyFamous
GloriouslyFamousLv3GloriouslyFamous

It is a great systems novel! There is only 5 chapter so far and it is created very well. The story is enjoyable, and the introduction is done effectively. The world created seems very diverse and rich. The author definitely has done his/her research making the world seem very much like, and RPG game, but there are other elements, which are new and not seen before making the world unique. The writing quality and grammar are decent, some minor mistakes that can easily be solved after a reread. The MC is described well and you already get a feel of him in the first 5 chapters. I am sure we will learn more about him as the story progresses. Well done! I will continue reading this enjoyable story.

ky_rine
ky_rineLv10ky_rine

This is superb! I love transmigration, fantasy, action, and adventure stories. This one is such a complete package! The game like setting and the system were additions that got my interest the most. I like the MC, though he was thrown in a different world without any warning, still he remained strong. The plot is amazing. Looking forward for more.

RJMidnight
RJMidnightLv3RJMidnight

This story is not bad, it is far from what I expected. The story is not for me at all. It is interesting for people who like stories like this, and your world building is very good. You have a nice writing style that keeps people in. The problem is the grammar, if you reread through your story, you can easily find them. But the grammar mistakes are small and doesn’t throw off the story. Unfortunately this story is not for me, but for the people is will enjoy the story.

ClumsyPandaStudios
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This a great systems novel and I highly recommend it. Just reading the book makes you feel like you're in the world. The author has clearly done a lot of research before writing this novel because everything seems like an RPG games. I love the development of the story and the character Kite. I don't typically read system novels but this has really opened up my interests in system novels. Keep up the consistent uploads author! I love it! - ClumsyPanda[img=recommend]

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiLv12Sabin_Subedi_Fei

Games novel aren't my genre but I'm slowly trying to get into it. I guess if the author keep updating better and more chapters every day then I'll really fall into this genre. I really love the idea and concept that the author is writing in his book with games which is very hard in fact since it requires more creative than another genre, so I really hope to read more chapters.

Vis7777
Vis7777Lv1Vis7777

Overall, it's pretty good and definitely a fun read. The system isn't the most helpful or very complex but I'm still in the early stages of the story. Instead of flooding readers with a bunch of information, the author makes the smart choice to push on with the narrative. Kite is a likable protagonist. He's sympathetic, since he was thrown into a game-like world out of nowhere one day and in the body of someone who is low level. He works hard to get himself ahead and the story already has some nice lady characters if you enjoy some intimacy between characters. The only issues I had with the story were the tense changes in the middle of sentences. Most of the time, instead of using can or can't, use could or couldn't. Otherwise, I recommend the story, it's pretty good. With a little bit of editing I'm sure it'll do even better in the future.

Killerpants
KillerpantsLv2Killerpants

A hooking synopsis and interesting character design. The world that the author built here is truly fascinating. Character interaction is also well-written and the very concept of this story is intriguing. Good luck, author! Keep up the hard work!

SnowPenguin
SnowPenguinLv3SnowPenguin

It's good. There's a large focus on development and levelling up and is overall an interesting story with unique dialogue and characters that bounce off well from each other. It's a fun story to read and be entertained by.

MidGard
MidGardLv4MidGard

So far so good! carry on releasing please! Can't wait to see more. Sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Don't mind me! Word limit

SolAce
SolAceLv3SolAce

Good plot with flowing words makes the reading enjoyable. Definitely would recommend readers to check out the book before you decide to skip it ! The only part I was a little uncomfortable with is him sleeping with different women. That just isn’t my cup of tea. However, I do wish you the best for your writing and keep up the good work author !

bibiyenini
bibiyeniniLv3bibiyenini

Not into video games at all since it is a male lead but the transmigration plot really will drive you in! What if he cannot go back to his real world?

SasukeRinnegan
SasukeRinneganLv2SasukeRinnegan

Honestly, the first 5 chapters had some mistakes but I persevere a little bit too since I'm interested in the plot. It was pretty obvious the author was a newbie in writing and always asked for help and advice. But as I read further, I can see his improvements. His writing style becomes more amazing and I got hooked on the story before I knew it. Continue the good author!!!

CarrolStark
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XiaoKops
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I'm quite new here in webnovel and this is the 8th book I read. The chapters are still lacking and I really want the author to update fast.. This is a good novel after all.

Dann_Giovanni
Dann_GiovanniLv1Dann_Giovanni

Infinite Gamplay is a book of fiction written by MikruZero. As a man born during the 80s, I couldn't quite understand things but it was an interesting read. I've got to say, it follows an amazing plot even if I'm not fond of games, weapons, and things similar to this. It's always nice to learn something new from the younger generations. It's a great action novel, having all the elements of a good action book. I'm not sure if it follows a similar trope since I'm not used to reading these sort of things. The main character is someone a reader would root or love. The pace is stable. I love it when stories are smooth and not dramatically filled with a ton of overused details. The major flaw of the novel is the grammar and punctuation. Commas go inside the dialogue not outside. Too many usage of ellipses can irritate the reader. Some sentences were more of a phrase. I want to root for the author! You can do it! I know it's hard to learn the grammar rules, but we've all been there before, and I know you can too! I suggest that you sign up in Reedsy. They give free English courses. Overall, it's a fun, great book that the current generation will definitely love.

MateoisMe
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Natsu_gildarts
Natsu_gildartsLv4Natsu_gildarts

Nice........................................................................................................................................

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiLv12Sabin_Subedi_Fei

This is amazing novel. I guess author is really into games and he is also making plot stable which is considered to be most important for any novel. Work hard author