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Reviews of In the World of Naruto with a trading system

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In the World of Naruto with a trading system

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

not a review ....thoughts/ and warning.. reading C12 the way its written, its so easy to see how MC could've prevented the uchiha massacre. look, u want to follow cannon cause u cant exactly make up new shit, is fine, but the way u've written, and fact that u acknowledge the solution itself and show that the MC has the capabilities to prevent it makes it look retarded. its all pointless drama. what I mean? -MC himself acknowledges shisuis sharigan and how it can control people and can use it to prevent the massacre [ C 12 ]. why not warn itachi? MC has an all mighty system, I mean this thing is so powerful it can literally sense hidden anbu and send a pic of them to MC's brain, and it was a passive ability, like a warning, thats how fking powerful it is, [ literally does it in c12- unless changed ]. if its that powerful, why not by a lying skill, tell he has a ability to see future or something and use that to warn itachi a couple months before the massacre and use the Kotoamatsuki on the village heads [danzo] a few weaks earlier or something? The system is so powerful. instead MC acts like a bitch, does nothing and then screams vengeance on the village heads......... ------------------------ but, fine, u did first part for story,....why isnt MC itachi lvl genius? dude could've easily graduated early and become anbu and become stronger with system. cause this shit is hax. cause of what it did. its intentionally neutered along with the MC ur story is interesting but its ruined [ for me ] cause of how easily MC could've changed cannon. and the fact that something so allmighty is purposefully neutered and yet still has hax abilities. The 2 reasons mentioned above just remove any interest I have. U could've just inserted MC after the uchiha massacre instead of this cause so far the way its written , MC had all the time and ability to save uchiha but didnt Also why is MC still using the Chinese name ye chen instead of his given name Tatsu? why not use one fking name? **: is this urs? it seems like a Chinese FF. cause of the chinse name, system and the general way its written. just asking

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Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5Harem_fan

I cant read this any more!!!!! It is soooooo stupid to give an MC two friging names in a novel, it makes it really hard to focus....here is an example! "Tatsu, do you want to play together?" Itachi told Ye Chen. "No, I'm full. I'll go back to the room first. "Ye Chen declined Itachi's invitation and returned to the room alone.

WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11WN_grdy_mthr_fker

why is it that only people with horrible English has such good stories.

Olejka_Avtor
Olejka_AvtorAuthorOlejka_Avtor

As an author, of course, I'll put a solid 5 !!! This is a translation, not an original work. One of the best Naruto fanfiction I've read.

Blackwater
BlackwaterLv11Blackwater

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mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5mutekishifu

after the uchiha massacre it's just bullshit, at least learn to do something right if you are going to do all this bad drama, buy sharinga in 3 tomoe to wake up the drug mangekyou, (and don't say it didn't work, if the first level cost 100 out of 500 the rest would be less than 2000)

Yuri_yuri
Yuri_yuriLv4Yuri_yuri

good novel but it bothers me the fact that he continues to use his old name when he already has a new one the rest of the novel is good but the name it gives me bothers and uncomfortable a lot I can't read to

Obsideon
ObsideonLv4Obsideon

Im too lazy and furious to write ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

rogD
rogDLv13rogD

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awi_devil
awi_devilLv3awi_devil

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CarrolStark
CarrolStarkLv14CarrolStark

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

Potofhoney
PotofhoneyLv4Potofhoney

Very good............................................................................................................................................................................................................

TheViciousVillain
TheViciousVillainLv2TheViciousVillain

Well it contains alot of holes but I liked it nonetheless .... hmm it's not harem right? Yeah. .and don't make it romance or whatever too early the plot is going to be ruined like that :( at least reach chapter 90~100 or something~ first

goldenswaggerboy
goldenswaggerboyLv4goldenswaggerboy

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Hunter_101
Hunter_101Lv13Hunter_101

the story is shit mc is a pussy and stupid Dude trys to act cold to the family later starts crazy if you love them why bo show them there are lots of ways to save them but nooo if mc wanna follow canon why become narutos friends

KiLo_R
KiLo_RLv3KiLo_R

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Noirlight
NoirlightLv2Noirlight

I like the story a lot but I am finding the changing of the MC name throughout the story to be annoying. Other review-ist on here claim that the 'author' is not the 'author' but actually a translator so I don't know what's going on with that. Some of the words stops in the middle so they are not finished an example would be: Example - Naruto made a new frie Example (of what it is supposed be be) - Naruto made a new friend.

Medalha
MedalhaLv7Medalha

exp ........................................................................................................................................

NEETsemsalvasao
NEETsemsalvasaoLv4NEETsemsalvasao

i can't stand reading this anymore it's just more the writer is just another fanboy of betas protagonists who hide their power from the start the altor has nerfed the MC's IQ when it's better for the canon, he spent 7 ****ed years knowing about the massacre uchiha and did nothing, then spent 1 year as a retard, i'm getting retarded reading this shit.

kylar20
kylar20Lv5kylar20

This will not be a translation of a novel called Naruto Expert System because it is the same at least in the beginning of it