It is a beautifully written story. I can tell the author loves dialogues, and it's the main thing in here. The exchange between the characters portrays their feeling and intention so well. Colours! The story just need a little bit of editing and then, poof, tension and interest will grab you in. If you like a normal woman in princess story scenario then do try and support this novel. To the Author, keep on writing, keep on expressing, keep lets us seeing what's in your creativity. Story must be told.
i like the plot, but it's confused me sometimes, a collage student who reincarnate become a princess and the witch cursed th king? how it happens? it;'s too short to explain what's going on, but it's a good story
Beautifully written and great characters .I love the MC and the fact that this is Reborn fic. My favorite . I hated Jack at first. Still do actually .but I will give him a chance. Great story author!
Its a really good story, I like the characters and the setting, might need to spend a bit more time on editing to get rid of the typos though :D
For me the story is nice but I think it can do better. The story plot is quite good... 👌👌😁😁 If the story quality increases it might get super hit. Even though I am going to add this to my library!!
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I like this story. The romance is very strong, it's hard to predict. Moreover, the plot has made me very curious. romance, adventure and reincarnation. Those are the only 4 genres that caught my attention while reading this. sorry about that... what is clear, good job and keep the spirit to write 😊👍
As always, it's about grammar. The plotline itself is interesting for anyone, who wants to read a book about reincarnation. Keep it up, author!
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