1 <Chapter 1>
[A/N: Hey guys! Here's the rewrite version of chapter 1 or prologue. I released it now bacause I wanted to know what you think of it, did it improve? Or get even worse? Also I want to correct what I say in the "Announcement" I published earlier, I will not just rewrite most of the chapter but the whole novel.]
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"What the heck!"
Where the hell is this place? I tought I already died. I died a little while ago by overdosing myself of sleeping pills because of severe depression, then why am I still alive and where is this place?
Well, this place you may ask?? It was all plain gray world in all 360 degree and nothing else. I dont know how much time had pass since I came here and all I been doing now is standing still and thinking of how to leave this mysterious grey world.
I started to walk around looking for a way out of this place, I walk north of my direction then take east as I didn't see anything but a grey world. I took every surroundings not finding anything but a grey background!
Long long time I still got no idea how to leave this mysterious place until I felt the world move. It's so strong that I have the feeling that I just saw the void tremble. It started to get stronger that I fell on my butt and felt the space around pressing me, the tremble get even stronger and the pressure of space around me is tightening, as though this grey world wanted to exterminate me.
I started to get scared as I feel a mysterious kind of pain not the pain I feel when I hit my body or cut my finger. It's another kind of pain, it's like the space.. no, this grey world is squeezing the core of my being.
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'That's right! I am already dead, so that means I am now a soul or a spirit?' As I reach that conclusion my body, no, soul started to shake even though I can't realy move even an inch of my soul body. I am really super scared now. 'so that means this is hell? And I am being punished for all the sins that I made in my life. I didn't know hell is true. Sigh… So, for all eternity I will now feel all this pain!?!?!' I didn't finish my thinking when suddenly I feel the space around me collapse and nothing.. I blacked out.
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Unknown to him that as he first felt the grey world tremble, an unknown powerful entity or more like the greyworld detected him.
[Detected an unidentified soul!]
[Start terminating the unidentified soul... .. 3%....9....]
[Failed! Cannot be terminated.. Re-initiate... 7%..]
[Failed! Cannot be terminated.. Re-initiate... 1%..]
[Failed! Cannot be terminated... Finding other countermeasure....35%... 98%..]
[ 2 Countermeasures found!... Scanning #1 countermeasure for Success Rate ...89%..
[Success Rate 1%... The unidentified soul will take control of the system.]
[Terminating countermeasure #1 … 100%]
[Countermeasure#1 Terminated! Scanning countermeasure #2 Success Rate …. 100%]
[Success Rate 100%!... Initiating countermeasure #2 Ejecting in void of space and time….100%]
As the voice of the world finished its quest, the space around the helpless soul tremble, trembled so strong that the space collapse and the helpless soul loss his conciousness as the void devoured him to the endless space and time.
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Ugh! As I regained my consciousness I ready and braced my self for the pain I felt on…. What... Where am I? Is all of that only a dream? But it felt so real.. I sat up in the bed that I didn't know I had with me and started to look around my surroundings and find myself in a seemingly small old-fashioned room, the only furniture is a simple closeth, the bed I am sitting on right now and the seemingly out-of-place sword, a real sword, on the bed side.
Wait.. don't tell me.. I hurriedly checked my body to see if my deduction was right. And bingo! Am right, I am in body of a child about 10-12 years old, I don't know what I look like as I didn't see any mirror or glass in this small room that I doubt have that kind of thing, as for the sword, yeah it's made out of metal but I can't still see my reflection in that.
After checking out my body, I now am sure that my suspicion was right. I got reincarnated in a body of a 10-12 year old child, but I still don't know what to feel as I still remember the pain I experience on that grey world and to suddenly reincarnate is.. I don't know, surprising? but I feel that there is more something to that, as I, in that grey world had a very sensitive feeling as I am a soul, and I really feel as if that grey world wanted to kill me.
Anyway that's that and this is this, I already reincarnated, this is already a big blessing, a miracle to live again. 'Oh! that's right! I might have a cheat ability like a powerful bloodline or even a system!' I thought.
"System!"I said in a silent voice as I don't want others to hear me because I only got reincarnated here and I don't even have the full memory of this body, only blurred memories.
…...nothing happened as I wait for 1 minute.
"System!" still nothing.
"Status!" I tried another key word the MC in the many system novel I read use, but still nothing happened not even a Ding! or Ping! sound.
I tried again, many times using different other names the MCs use in the novels I read but to no avail. 'What the.. don't tell me I don't have a system like the MCs in the webnovels I read? Isnt this unfair!?' I shouted in my mind, but of course I'm not really disappointed or anything, well maybe a little bit, as I reincarnating and living again is already a huge cheat in life so I'm not upset or anything.
After doing all that I decided to get out of bed and look outside of the window to see where this place is and if this is still my home world. But as I look into the window I heard a knock on the door and a voice of an energetic girl.
"Hey! Are you already awake!? It's already morning get up now!" Said the voice of the energetic girl.
I didn't respond for a second and just stood there as I don't know if I should respond, but I did as I don't want her to get in.
"Yes! Yes! I'm already awake, just go there first. I will go there later." I said, not letting the conversation to continue,
"Okay just be fast or I will take your share" Said the girl as she left.
"Ahhhh… thank goodness she didn't get suspicious of me.. And that feeling when I talk to her… I feel that it's the memory of this body's original owner resurfacing in my mind.. so I can still get the memory of this body, that's so helpful as I don't think I can act like I have an amnesia or the like."I thought to my myself.
Anyway, I need to go there.. wait.. I don't know where to go as I ended our conversation without knowing what she is talking about. Sigh.. well I just need to get with it as I don't think this place will be big, considering my small room.
