Reviews of In One Piece as asf;lalfljdsf

At first i thought this was good, but what the author uses to signal dialogue is stupid confusing and frustrating, the fact that iits lea the author did no research whatsoever on the most basic things is disappointing. This isnt worth the time.

1⭐ writing quality /grammar . just so many mistakes that, I can't even understand what's happening anymore..... . it's getting bad & bad .. 🙂 . . . sigh**

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I read a few chapters and i gotta say it’s good but the way the author writes sucks. The story is good but “munky d harp” really? being english isn’t even an excuse. Hoe could u not write his name correctly? Did you even edit the chapters? Just double check it or something?

so he dropped another novel.... very mature .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... ....

Прекрасная работа, прочитал более 150 глав, надеюсь работу оценят за рубежом. . .. .. .. . . . . .... .. .. ... .... ... . . ... . . . . .

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This would be such a god awful original novel you’d be lost by the third chapter after you skipped the second for being too boring It’s not an original novel, though you will understand why i brought up how terrible it would be when you get to the first original island It’s just a disappointment reading this novel, everything gets worse the longer it goes

I really like your story the way how the mc is reincarnated as usopp and made him use real guns instead of his slingshot, when it will be useful when starts learning haki he could be like erron black ( from mortal Kombat). 🤩🤩🤩

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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

are you not going to write lemon here, imean your Naruto work have a ton so i expect the same heree ..........................................................................................................................................................

Writing- ⭐⭐⭐ Update-. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Plot-. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character-. ⭐⭐ World- ⭐⭐⭐ The author seems to have some idea about where he want the plot to really progress. But on the other hand his story writing quality is fine, not great, Fine; as in the author needs to pay attention to what he wants to convey and really proofread his work before uploading. Will C how his fic's quality will be as it continues, if it continues.

novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

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