SupremeCookie
Extremely boring fan fiction. The characters are banal NPCs. The dialogues between the characters are stupid and monotonous, I constantly see praise for the main character there. The author, it seems, has never met a girl, relationships are not built like that, well, no, at 6-10 years old to arrange a "sexy" massage, from what do girls end up? What kind of nonsense is this? Why are there so many spam reviews without any normal criticism? Although what do I expect from working in webnovel, especially with the tag "harem".
BEST NARUTO FF, all things are included 1) op mc 2) no ntr or drama 3)lemons 4)all best girls 5)comedy top notch 6)nice mc, not those emo or antihero types or cold and indifferent or the one who just have one night stands. 7)author interacts regularly. I am rereading it from ch1 hehe~ hope that you will keep posting and would not stop. LOVE YOUR FF
Imma give you my honest review. The plot has potential no doubt as it is somewhat unique And could be better if you can flesh out the character more. Writing fanfic is not easy and I appreciate your effort. People would complain amd sometimes it can be discouraging but if you are serious about writing then let the review be inspiration for writing journey. I wont tell you it is good as it can give you false impression and can create a bottleneck for your own thinking and story writing creativity. But even though it is not upto the standard, it is still enjoyable and hope you continue to write and also improve your quality as I have lot of hope in your fanfiction.
Too many plot holes and continuity errors. The author notes actually say things like "There are plot holes in this chapter, ignore them and just enjoy" and "I don't care about how this is supposed to happen, meh the important thing is protagonist can get more girls now". Also, there is blatant bias against Sakura in at least upto the chapters I have read, so skip this if you like Sakura.
It started off really good! Until the Author started writing about the MC having kids at 12. Then controlling is nut to only have girls. Then talking about marrying his kid in the future. His own daughter.... Really weird group of people that like this. Author literally said in the comments its good to keep it in the Family.... Kreep