Question/Not a chapter?

I know you all don't like this but it's important so bear with me.

So here is the deal. I want to all of you to comment the part where you think are mistake or could make the chapters better and think I should know about or some new plot or plots which will make the novel better. I have really been down this days.

So I plan to relax for some days. so chapters will not be release regularly for sometimes and revise all the chapters. so I could make the story better.

I really want everyone to enjoy my book as I enjoy reading other novels and this is my first time writing. so bear with it and help me improve.

Thank you!!