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DaoisttG3KuY
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bit.ly/3LyRF1N 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

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Ella_Annie
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overall good story, more updates keep it up authormoonbunnie💯💯💯💯💯💓💓💓💓💓💓💯💯💯💯💓💓💓💓💯💯💓good sex mature scene, 💓💓💓💓💓💓

Olanke_Ayanfe
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real mature *** scene omg omg I love it alot 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😫😫😫😫😫🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜💯😜🥰🥰😜💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

Bella_Ann_8653
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story was so good this story hooks me up storyline so amazing I hope you get many tons of likes review and votes keep writing and updating 💓

DaoistO5II0c
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I won't stop commenting on ur books everything is so amazing dear author😋😘😊☺️😚🥰😙😍😗🤩💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😚😚💯

Writertinu
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Wow 🤩. This novel is one of the most awesome novels I have ever read. 💪 I recommend this book. Keep it up author, well done ✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻

Joondabest_
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good work, the potential is high, there. The characteristic qualities are good and well done. The author's perspectives are new and improved. keep it up, author!

Laura25
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It was fantastic and I give it 5 stars Don't judge the book it's really nice to read I love it and I was mermarize by this novel It's was well written and chapters was well details Kudos author you just gain another fan Highly recommend

Hawaiianpizzapie
HawaiianpizzapieLv1Hawaiianpizzapie

Omg this is mature. So interesting story, the summary was amazing. It got my attention, actually. I'm hooked and looking forward to the next chapters. I'm waiting hahaha. Nice job, author.

DaoistEHsMf1
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highly recommend dialogue so perfect your English is so good easy to read and erotic makes me🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤 keep it up author and keep undating

BellaAn63504691
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highly recommend dialogue so perfect your English is so good easy to read and erotic makes me🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤 keep it up author and keep undating

Megana4
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I love reading romantic novels... it takes you to a different world...The starting line of the Synopsis caught my attention to read the story further...The mature content is very well executed...There are just a few errors in expressing wise between the characters... the rest of the story is breathtaking...I hope the story ends on a happy note...Looking forward to reading more chapters...Excellent work, Author!

Dugzaw
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Although this is not my cup of tea and not the genre I typically read, I truly commend your writing ability. Anyone who writer mature content is a patient and passionate writer to me. You have strong vocabulary and strong dialogue. I enjoy your backstory and the plot that is unfolding. Good work. Keep it up!

Oracle17
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I'm not a fan of erotica but I did notice a few things about your book. I noticed the dialogues were not quoted, you can work on that. I actually sympathise with Catherine seeing how she was maltreated; it was a little bit sad actually. That said, I think you can still work on your punctuations and grammar though🌹.

BlackFluteofLove
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i loved the way the author have described each part of the scene..the character expressions, there feelings. its really made me imagine. i love the story... and looking for upcoming chapters. good luck author❤

BlazeS929
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Even though I don't like this type of stories, the author did a great job narrating the erotic actions, but you think that the dialogues are part the action or narration, the author should make the dialogues more distinguishable. But other than that, keep doing a good job.

Bella_Ann_4963
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omg, the *** scene of hardy and Mardy it's so hot so fucking hot amazing story I hope you get tons of fans and contribution keep waiting author, you are so amazing

jaiella
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Characters way too short but it's really hooked me up Can't stop reading this fantastic novel I'm in love with this Well written 👍 Its pretty good for someone to recommend this🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

DaoistFGNlFa
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The chapters are very short and it's unclear who's talking to whom because there are missing punctuations. Though the story seems awesome as it's very descriptive 😍 kudos author! It's hard to think of writing a story but you made one! You are amazing!

myamor
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Wow mature, emotional, s*x reading scene 🤤 Goona add this to my reading list I'm looking forward to read I'm anxious waiting for this amazing novel update Or better still give us 5 more chapters 👄