I love reading romantic novels... it takes you to a different world...The starting line of the Synopsis caught my attention to read the story further...The mature content is very well executed...There are just a few errors in expressing wise between the characters... the rest of the story is breathtaking...I hope the story ends on a happy note...Looking forward to reading more chapters...Excellent work, Author!
Although this is not my cup of tea and not the genre I typically read, I truly commend your writing ability. Anyone who writer mature content is a patient and passionate writer to me. You have strong vocabulary and strong dialogue. I enjoy your backstory and the plot that is unfolding. Good work. Keep it up!
I'm not a fan of erotica but I did notice a few things about your book. I noticed the dialogues were not quoted, you can work on that. I actually sympathise with Catherine seeing how she was maltreated; it was a little bit sad actually. That said, I think you can still work on your punctuations and grammar though🌹.