ManOfCultureLeon
It started well ... Chapter 01- 08π good story, but MC seems to have stupid hero complex. Chapter 09 - 29 ππ MC became very OP, MC can throw cars as if they don't weigh a ton. MC amuses himself by murdering innocent people (chapter 28, MC victims foraging for food, protecting children and women), mercilessly or regardless of whether it is female. Then MC converse with the family of his victims (the father, mother and sister), MC say that he murdered his children and the father says: ok (summary)... [Is this how a father reacts when he learns that his son was murdered?worst of all, MC tells the family of his victims to join his group and they say: ok what? Seriously? MC is now a psycho OP, pervert who only thinks with his c*ck... not is problem but your stupid hero complex DO NOT combine.
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It started well. When you started adding other crossovers is when it went downhill. I was fine with resident evil. Then sone more made their way in. It became a mess of who's who. I had no idea who half the new characters were or from where they were. Then Keichi came in for unknown reason and I figured it's not going to get better. Most of my criticism is due to unrecognisable fandom choices. I wish you best of luck though.
it started off pretty good but the amount of edgy bashing cringeness of mc and his maxed out pick up skills at girls really bugs me too much, the grammar is good enough and the world background is so-so, added characters are too many that it confuses me who that guy is and who that guy was? you won't really expect good stuffs here but maybe it's different from dic minds who read this types of novels.
After reading further I can honestly say that the story is... BORING A F There was nothing more to it in the story since its all nearly predictable. You can summarize the flow in a few words. Survive and gain more women. I mean there's nothing exciting to it. The story goes like this: MC leads, enemy comes(mutant or normal zombies, umbrella corp) then MC saves the day and takes more women. Thats all there is to it. It can even suit the moto of pokemon "Gotta Catch'em all". The growth can be minimally seen in the MC, maybe on his collection of pokemon but on others heck no. The author kept putting other characters down except for the MC. You know i'm all for it with harem but collecting girls like pokemon really brings out the "virginity aura" of an author. Why not just remove all male in every world if you're going to have that many lovers? Its sounds amusing and exciting for virgins but it doesn't for those are not. I swear if I a dollar for every virgin author that writes about an OP MC who collects women like pokemon id be rich by now.
Ends up have a unrestrained Harem that just ends up ruining the story. I am fine with Harem novels but this one got way outta hand and super early in to story too. Like the auther trys to write the MC as being all manly about it, but instead the MC ends up being a giant SIMP to all the females. He never say no to them, the MC needs to grow a backbone with females