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In Earth-38, With A Sharingan

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Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv6Sage_HiddenBear

Honestly, its boring. The story essentially skips all the world building and character building with a few lines in chapter 1. He goes through age 0 all the way to 24 in a few small paragraphs. He also mentions waiting on canon to start. Its dc. What canon? Which one? It seemed like he meant the supergirl tv show but i honestly was wondering where the rest of the dc universe went? Author ignores the entire world that is full of action and events of all sorts.

ABSenior
ABSeniorLv4ABSenior

Author you are doing a good job, just continue doing it. Best of Luck! Many times people just drop because there are not many Chp. so I am going to bookmark it and keep it. I will read it later on when it will have at least 20 Chp. or fight arc will begin. ThankYou Btw.

zarike
zarikeLv1zarike

The mc is 24 years old and easily Kage level so far in the story, even if he barely trained. Nice. There are a few paragraphs with clones that nobody understands... The mc killed his girlfriend, ruined their family finances, and probably broke that girl's sister. All in all, the Author is an imbecile.

Zhanye
ZhanyeLv5Zhanye

I honestly found a very promising story, but the disappointment was big, 6 chapters and I didn't enjoy anything, I wasn't curious about the future, I didn't feel immersed in the story, I felt I was watching a slide show that I will probably forget in 15 minutes. Note: I hope you learn from criticism instead of deleting comments and pretending it never happened.

TurtleManiacc
TurtleManiaccLv4TurtleManiacc

dont drop it continue doing amazing job thanks and have a nice day sir/miss :) dont drop it continue doing amazing job thanks and have a nice day sir/miss :) dont drop it continue doing amazing job thanks and have a nice day sir/miss :) dont drop it continue doing amazing job thanks and have a nice day sir/miss :) dont drop it continue doing amazing job thanks and have a nice day sir/miss :)

Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4Darwin111111

Honestly, I'm not going to say the stars as I normally do, because I mostly consider it a waste of time. I will just give the information without further ado. First of all, the character is reborn, that is not a problem, but for some reason he is the kind of weird that, without knowing the world he is in, starts to meditate, finding an energy in him and, by destiny. and without anything else, it says that it is Chakra from the world of naruto. The most common is that he thinks that he is Ki or Chi, but there is him. The other thing is: The character has a relentless memory, it seems that he can remember the entire naruto series, because 9 years after he was born, it was said that he could already use X amount of jutsus that I do not remember, which does not make much sense even with photographic memory, because the techniques not only require hand stamps, but also move the chakra through the chakra circulatory system. I mean, they literally don't show why the specific chakra circulatory system needs to go through, and how much chakra needs to go through, along with the hand seals, to form the jutsu. He literally learns them out of nowhere. The protagonist can defeat a Kage, when he obviously does not have the ninja training to move his body, or do the basics to move properly. I mean, the guy shouldn't even put people into Genjutsu, because he's supposed to infuse them with his Chakra, so that they go through the person's Chakra and I got to where the Chakra travels in the brain, the place where he will manipulate the Chakra to affect the brain. There are other things, but honestly there are many and I have already written too much. In short, it is not good, because even the narration, the story and the rest is not. Honestly, I like the author, or rather the Green Lantern Story, because for someone who has not seen many Marvel comics, seeing this type of fanfic is pleasant. (Literally, because even if it's copied and pasted from the comic, it's still good for me because I haven't seen it. Lol).

Ali93
Ali93Lv5Ali93

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ryanryan
ryanryanLv5ryanryan

Dope story. I really liked it and I thought it was different from the other DC stories.

IceEmperor
IceEmperorLv5IceEmperor

I really liked the plot, great imagination so please continue to write and please release more chapter as we can't wait for mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore......

Pyuog
PyuogLv4Pyuog

I love it very much keep it up!!! 14040404040404440040404040404040404044040404040404040404040404004040400404040404040404040404040404040404040404040

ReMormius
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Piotr_Uklejewski
Piotr_UklejewskiLv3Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

Shameless_Buddha
Shameless_BuddhaLv6Shameless_Buddha

Please don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop pls don't drop.

Blue_Sovereign
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Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv4Demiurge_Ohara

To be honest with you , this is promising to me , but I dont know about the others , At least it's good to me, No wrong grammar and sentence as far as I read and The plot is interesting and promising,

BapukBanget
BapukBangetLv6BapukBanget

Nice start, fast pace become OP MC, i like it so far, maybe author should make more updates, as a new entry, 2 chaps/day is great. Or maybe 1 chap daily is enough. I like MC to be more ruthless, not mean, but more ruthless. Please keep up the good work

Blue_Sovereign
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Blue_Sovereign
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christophlu
christophluLv4christophlu

Very nice start and idea i hope you will update it often...........................................................................................................................................................