luna_sol
Again this Author is being shameless again, reviewing her own work. “ψ(`∇´)ψ Why 5 star? Because I wanna support my own work. hehe. Writing Quality Issue : I am being honest here, my grammar is not good, please excuse for some/many grammatical issue in the novel, practice makes perfect so I am hoping my writing will improved too. My treasured readers said that I am improving, and I am really happy for that 💕💕. - I hope the webnovel will notice this novel and give me a chance to work for them as an author, and if that happen I will get an editor as soon as they contact me 😎😎, because right now this author is really poor and my income from part-time is enough for my college fees. While I am currently waiting, I am reading dictionary in my free time to help me improve. That is it, for my treasured readers now I really love you guys for supporting me and for my future readers I hope you can bear with me. Please give this novel a chance. Thank you 💖
HELLO SHAMELESS AUTHOR HERE AGAIN GIVING A 5 STAR HEHEHEHE. Anyway good news, an angel is now editing this novel, Yey !! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 I put our angel wn in IWED synopsis. So if you see any mistake in the later chapters, it is not yet edited. So don't give me a low review again because of writing quality because it will improve 🤧🤧. Just review about the Story. 😊😊 Thank you so much.
It's my first time making a story and a first time giving review, I know I'm kind of shameless but I still wanna give myself a 5 star hehe 😂 Anyway.. "Pag stress sa work or sa class mag beauty rest para iwas stress" At dahil you have time for yourself, read something na mkkapagpagoodvibes to ourselves with good feeling.. Anyway Hello guys, hello world, hello Kapatid,kapamilya,kapuso welcome to my novel. Please support me.
Writting is good Update please more chaptre I like the developement of the story Character good i like how i don't know how to writte a story but i love the surprise and the mestry and sense of justice i love it when i read i see the idea of the athour as it is his reality and how find solution for his probleme
It is my luck to find this novel earlier, I wish I find it later. I really like the story at first I was confused but later it was answer. The story focus first at her memories and It was awesome. I never got bored, it was present well and you will want to read more. This story is really unique. I'm already tired from the transmigration or being reborn for revenge or what not so I don't have expectation in this one but you make me absorb. Maybe it's not a thing for the other all have their opinions but mine opinion is mine.. There is a mystery, a comedy, historical and fantasy all in blend. I just hope that the author will not stop writing the novel. It have a big potential.
I rate this a 4.6 because the plot of this story is really amazing. I also like the character development that the author does so well. Also, the author is pretty good with her English-and even better when you consider the fact that English is not her first langauge. I hope that this novel gets more attention- as it deserves. 😀
Read this!! This is my 2nd time I will give review to this novel, I already follow this novel in its early stage because of uniqueness and mysteries. And right now I am not disappointed because it just keeps my day, this is now my favorite after the hidden mark novel. Some didn't like it because of translation but heck I understand it when Im only 9 years old. The other said it have a plot hole but did you even read the novel? Can't you see that its just cliffhanger ?the author just want us to become curious and all of your answer will be given at a later time. Anyway I support this novel from the bottom of my heart. 5star is not enough for this novel. Writing Quality : I love it. Stability of Updates: Everyday but when our author is busy she/he will tell us about it and if she didn't update for 1 day it will become her debt, haha. Story Development: At first I thought it was slow but its okay because I have fun lol and the author already said it will be a long journey I think will have 1kchapter or more and I am happy to hear that because this novel just keep my day, it have a moral lesson. Character Design: All characters have their own characters and differences the author story telling make me feel in the novel myself its true.. There is one time that I feel that my scene changed and I saw what is written inside. World Background: The only I can say it I fall in love in the world. 💓💓 Will support you always. Thanks for giving us a chapter even if you are a busy person.
I love how easy to follow the story is. The fluent and calm atmosphere allows you to better grasp what is happening while still remembering what sort of environment is caused. Although the grammar needs some minor tweaks, thevstory will grasp the full attention of the reader. As for how the story goes, it keeps giving of a mysterious vibe as you progress, encouraging you to keep going in order to solve what questions have been given. The frequent updates are also a good reminder that the author really loves what he/she is doing. Keep up the good work author! :)
Nice work! The essentials, for me, are already there. I can say that the story is heading in the right direction. It just needs a few changes in terms of grammar and writing. First, I feel quite uncomfortable looking at the inconsistent casing of the chapter titles, or even the title of the book itself. Second, the form of nouns. Sometimes plural nouns are written as singular. Vice versa. Third, tenses. Slight inconsistency in present and past tenses. Don't worry it's all minor and it doesn't affect the story very much. Also, I can see you improve as I progress in the story. Good job, author!