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Reviews of Immortal: Throughout the Universe with his Wives

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Immortal: Throughout the Universe with his Wives

Zuyaaa

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Zuyaaa
ZuyaaaAuthorZuyaaa

Hi, authors here! Here's what you can expect from this Book. Positive 1.) I will update every day until the WPC finish, so after that, maybe the chapters would be irregular between 4-7 chapters a week. 2.) I'll not go to drop this novel unless something urgent happened I will just go on hiatus. 3.) Expect something great on the story with no cliche or whatsoever reason of love interest at love at first sight like any other harem. There's a process on here. Negative 1.) I'd just starting to learn English Writing so please be with the mistake. 2.) Expect grammar and word mistakes as I was just writing on my phone. 3.) This is my first book, so when things go south, we go south!! I think that's all that you need to know for now, bye! Oh, before that, try to support me as much as you can if you enjoy the book by voting! ;)

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hejaiizjcf
hejaiizjcfLv12hejaiizjcf

Heh, I’ve enjoyed this novel quite a bit so far and I’m looking foward to more chapters in the future. Nice work Misasa! ...................... gotta hit that minimum word count hehe

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

(Chapter 11): good story, you left it right at the lovers' reunion, I already want to see how their children will react (the he protagonist should not even know that left her pregnant), waiting for more episodes, do not leave us in suspense

WolfStar14
WolfStar14Lv4WolfStar14

I like the novel so far, it's original to see the point of view of an immortal while focusing on a more slice of life aspect instead of fighting all around. The MC is also good but I except him to grow faster ahah those poor women are waiting. Still his development as a character has a lot of potential ! There's also some errors here and there but they aren't that bad.

Daimon_Voldigod
Daimon_VoldigodLv12Daimon_Voldigod

good novel with potential, grammar mistakes are negligible, keep doing the lord's work bro. this is quite a new and fresh story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Holy_Roon
Holy_RoonLv5Holy_Roon

I really enjoyed reading the novel so far (till chapter 9 ). The story so far is something that you don't find so often on Webnovel. In some sentences, the grammar is not quite correct and would benefit from additional editing. Thats being picky though.

KindaWeirdChampBro
KindaWeirdChampBroLv3KindaWeirdChampBro

Still not finished with the novel but hey, liking it so far and if you're the one who wrote it i'm sure i'll like it. :P ... Yeah, i kinda need to write more words to send the review so, ignore this last part lmao.

ErjasD
ErjasDLv13ErjasD

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zd4zaaa
zd4zaaaLv1zd4zaaa

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

LordKram
LordKramLv12LordKram

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