Reviews of Immortal Reincarnates to Goof-around

Hi there fellow daoists!! Thanks for taking your time to read my book. Finally I've managed to start penning this story. Sorry for my bad English in advance. I'm constantly trying to improve myself. And as already stated English is not my first language and you gotta believe me guys this one auxiliary chap just took me 2 whole days... srsly 2 whole days sincere respect to those having 7/week. those that give mass release are just gods born on Earth. lol give me suggestions to improve at this link https://***.webnovel.com/book/12563880406922505 Thank you for reading