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You want a cultural book ? If you want that, you can read this one... Try it and read it... Everything you want is in there... Culture is real !!!! //////// This is a cultural book...
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Great plot, great character, and great r-18 scenes, and awesome world building. This novel is one of favorites, I can say for certain that this is a story worth reading
Locked chapters all of a sudden. π€¬π€¬π€¬π€¬ Really shitty. Was nice while it lasted. Guess Iβll never know what happens next. π€ Oh well... βπ½
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ya lo dije antes, esta es una obra maestra del culto a las milfs y el incesto!!!!!!!!!! .......................................................................................................................................................................................expexpexp
Who knows how much fun a good story brings? (*_*) ah. Author! More updates. Faster faster faster! My sword rattles in thirst!!!! Hurry hurry hurry!
I was happily surprised with how more in depth the character actually went to to conquer his women. For an r-18 novel the women's feelings were lot more emphasized as well as romance which was refreshing. The grammar and spelling is not as bad as the author states. Its actually pretty decent and you completely understand everything, there is few mistakes, but not to the point of not understanding and ruining the immersion.
When i saw MILF tag im like. WHAT!? (you never play tuber simulator) How can i, the great Sin of Lust just found this *look at another tag and see forbiden relationship *smile lewdly nyuhuhu
WARNING: THIS NOVEL HAS BAD GRAMMAR SO PLEASE DON'T COMPLAIN ABOUT GRAMMAR IF YOU DECIDE READING THIS NOVEL LATER, I'LL BE VERY GRATEFUL IF YOU HELP ME CORRECTING MY GRAMMAR WHILE YOU READ THIS NOVEL
Hello, this is my first review for your novel. Mr Author, you said that your English was bad, but after I read about 3 chapters, in my opinion, its not that bad if I compared it to another novel in WN in fact it was better than the most novel in here. But it is a fact that your placement in word, paragraph, punctuation mark is a mess. So I recommend you to correct it if you have the necessary skill to improve it, but if you don't, I do not recommend it lest it will make it worse. I said that because many authors have horrible grammar to the point where I a person whose English is my fourth language could perceive it with ease and they don't have the necessary skill to improve their novel, but they force it so their novel become worse and worse and finally they stop writing and dropping their novel.
Pretty good story so far, pacing is decent, only thing I think its needs is someone to go through and fix all the grammar and spelling mistakes then I think it would be even better :)
The story is good................................. The story is a bit slow......................... Overall it's great................................
absolutely love this book including the very happy ending that it should have
i like this cover better it suits the story line more well done author good job
it is nice to complete this book looking forward your new book