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Your journey it began because YOU DIED. Out of your cell you ran and then YOU DIED. You pause to catch your breath And die another gruesome death So now you creep around each corner terrified Humanity restored and then YOU DIED. A graveyard to explore... HAHA DENIED. For every step you take Is just one more fatal mistake So you must learn to take the torture in your stride Bells chime torment Darkest descent Every soul spent To doom sent... Down in the depths of the dead Feel the agony Scars from a thousand wounds In your memory Over and over Grind through the butchery Once more you'll run this Gauntlet of misery Look to the sun's rays Behold and offer praise Look to the sun's rays Comfort in the glow Brave you may be You think that your mind is tough? Come have a go If you think you're hard enough Dive into death Embrace all the treachery Learn to enjoy The bloodshed and butchery Bells chime torment Darkest descent Every soul spent Once more you DIED.
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Review as of chapter 42. Rating: 4,6 This novel has very high potential. Author isn't relying on plot from the canon of DxD to drive the story. Now, why 4,6 instead of pure 5,0: Every chapter has at least 1 grammatical error, but it doesn't make it unreadable, you can easily infer the intent behind the writing. Example of those mistakes: incorrect usage of your and you're (at the bottom for author I will shortly describe which one to use where), incorrectly written word, or using an incorrect word (example: "you are very tough" vs "you are very though"). My other gripe would be that the romantic/emotional development of some female protagonists towards MC wasn't fully shown but just told that 'it happened' (Esdeath and Akeno). Overall the novel shows great promise with few issues that don't take away from the overall experience. We use "your" when we describe someones possession - for example: your dog, your pokemon, your pen, your anger, your death energy. We use "you're" when we describe someones state of being: you're angry, you're done for, you're victorious, you're dead. Hope this helps.
