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Im in Chapter 25 Review The story sucked in the later chapters It became too boring for me Writing Quality: meh Updating stability: per week Story Development: he just joined miach familia then go to the dungeon thats it Character Design: not really informative World Background: how come is solo leveling system is weaker than some weak ass gods with sealed arcanum? Sung jin woo can easily get stronger, The mc shouldβve become lvl 5 long ago
I read until chp 20 i can say its not bad but i dont enjoyed. I dont like system type fanfics if its not a heavy one its not a problem but this is too heavy for me. And character interactions really too lame or not exist at all. He is only grinding. I got bored. If he started with solo leveling word instead of danmachi it will be more exciting probably. A loner levels up lonely.
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Right, ill keep it short coz iβm on my phone. and typing on mobile webnovel hurts. If youβre reading comments, trying to decide whether to read or not, read it. Iβll keep spoilers out of it, but its not like any DanMachi fanfic i have read before. Its original and doesnβt have an mc that follows Bell around like he has carrots up his ass. Story has no harem and wont in the future - authors words. So if youβre looking for something that isnβt your usual webnovel harem trash, please read this. Author, thank you very much. You have my stones and my loyalty.
Excellent Potential with currently good chapters and a good story overall I like tha character interactions and the story is very clever in my opinion. I like the focal change where the main character isnt a focus character but we still hear about his exploits and in the future have him make cameos in the mcβs story the mc is different and the power system while the same is also unique and the two different systems blend beautifully. (Review written with only chapters 1-22 released)
Really Good by taking the less intricate route and giving the mc small character flaws while keeping hos personality so he isnt a caring idiot and he still follows his flaws (relying too much on someone elses experience and being slow wotted for example not thinking the system will be different until the class quest despite the multiple hints given) and the author give the spotlight to minor characters and avoids getting caught up in sob stories
TL;DR: The story's good stuff. Give it a go! The story attends to the adventures of a reincarnated person, who landed in the time and place of the main 'Danmachi' franchise. It contains minor elements of 'Solo Leveling'. The MC is not riding the canon train and is minding his own business for the greatest part. While avoiding unwanted attention, he gets stronger with the help of his cheat system, making Bell's EXP grinding rates seem adorable! The author is very much on point when it comes to the story progression, the action scenes and the several different stat numbers. The unimportant data is filtered, making the story less tiring, bland and repetitive. The MC possesses knowledge of most of the stuff that's going on and tends to act selectively and accordingly in regards to them. He doesn't always get involved with troublesome stuff when there is no need. Moreover, he doesn't hesitate and is very decisive when the situation calls for it. The story seems to do justice to some side characters of the show. The MC chooses a minor Familia and they get their own development as well. Lastly, the romance stuff is at check and I can't see the story getting led astray any time soon. As a proud member of the No-Harem Sect, I want to believe!