The_Unique
THIS IS TO GOOD PLEASE COME READ IT GIVE YOUR STONES SO THAT HE WILL GIVE MORE CHAPTER AND MORE CHAPTER IS BETTER FOR ME MHUAHAHHAHA !! This story is really good the plot is intressting the charater are good the writing is good the world background is good i just want more chapter :3 Go see it it worth it !! ^^
I'm not serious when it comes to writing quality, but it was hard to read. The mc is plain and the set of family goal is questionable because most of the people he takes in are not in need at all. I get create a family, but this ain't it, its like taking in rich kids because you feel like making a family. World background:animals worlds he travels upon. stability is alright. Story development is weird, Pretty plain. I usually never write bad reviews but this went downhill. But it is decent to pass the time. His powers are cool doe. I might have been harsh, still thank you for the novel.
All i can say it that its a good story. Don't expect too much from the title. Sure its a story based on multivers but keep in mind its a very short novel.So donโt be like there are only few arcs. Overall It's a good read. Try giving it a chance. And to author... well there are some grammar mistakes here and there(well I'm not someone to talk about them) but you can improve upon them . Youโve nice ideas and a smooth flow of the story which i liked the most. Hope you continue writing and create some awesome ff or original of your own . Good luck. Stay safe. peace out ๐ค
Love the story please continue it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
It was gold... Until I heard Harem and dropped right there nd then. Icba with Harem, niggas can't settle with romance smh. ......... ..................... ..................... ........ ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ..................... ........ ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ............................. ..................... ..................
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