1 First Wish of 3

//I reviewed the chapter and fixed the mistakes I found in grammar or typos if I missed someone leave it in a comment

Hi, everyone, this is Sora. I am a college student at the second-best university in the country. I was an orphan but I was adopted by a good elderly couple who looked after me and I loved them like my own parents and called them father and mother after 1 year of being with them.

when I became old enough to work, I worked hard to looked after them and try to repay them for raising me by giving them peace of mind to not to worry about me and send them on vacations to have fun, after all, at that time they were old and shouldn't be looking after someone at their age and it was all fun, and I was happy till the passed away my mother passed away first then my father soon followed, It really hurt me but I prayed for their safe crossing and believed that they were in a better place now, and was happy that they can finally rest now. but a year after they died boredom struck me this, feeling that this isn't the life I want anymore, and started asking why wasn't I born in anime or MU or xianxia worlds. and felt the only thing that kept me going in this boring world was my parents after they died, I tried all type of dangerous sports, hacking and martial arts but nothing satisfies me I wanted more, I wanted to fight monsters or people, get to be overpowered and get the woman I want.

but my boring days continued and I kept losing interest in living. years past and I am now in my final year in college three years after my father died and I couldn't take it anymore, the boredom is killing me so I open the window of my room on a stormy night and shout at the sky.

" I WANT TO HAVE FUN I WANT MORE I CAN'T LIVE IN THIS WORLD ANY MORE PLEASE IF ANYONE ANYTHING UP THERE CAN HEAR ME HELP ME PLEASE "

I say that and wait under the rain and hope something happens that someone up there heard me and answer me.

after a couple of minutes, I start losing hope and tell myself self "that there is no escaping this life and I should just give up" then a voice strikes me in my mind.

" don't be hasty young one I was just preparing for your departure from this world so brace for impact see you in a couple of seconds "

I look around me impatiently thinking that someone is behind me but I see no one then I remember what he said and asked myself what did he mean by " brace for impact " then it hits me as I say wait then I look up and I see lighting coming for me but I can't dodge and boom.

pure darkness is all I see. I panic then calm myself then think of my parents and try to look for something anything in this darkness . but find nothing then I hear the voice again.

" Welcome Sora, Come inside "

and the darkness is gone and light is everywhere and I see a guy who looks young. I want to say something but he speaks first and asks me " How was the trip here? was it fun? "

I hear this and I go are you for real right now and answer " yes, it was very fun I always wanted to be struck by lightning, it feels greet "

He ignores my remark. "Good you know it took me a couple of minutes to get it everything ready to get you here"

and I replay " are you really complaining about the effort it took you to kill me "

" What do you mean killing you kid what I did was answer your wish and bring you to me if I wanted to kill you I wouldn't need even two seconds "

I hear his words and open my mouth in O shape for a second then get overflowed with excitement.

" are you serious? will you really help me achieve my dream ?"

" Of course boy why would I bring you here for then, so tell me what world you want to be born in and choose 3 wishes to send you there with "

'okay okay calm down you thought about this hundred times before this is your dream .so calm down for god sake calm down and think ..' a couple of minutes later ' okay I am calm now I am ready for the wishes I don't need time for those I already thought about it before and I have the best most OP wishes I can dream of but let's ask if there is limit first and according to that I will be choosing the wishes I want then I will choose the world '

"can I choose the wishes first and are there any limits? "

"you can and no limits I am someone with strength only second to god and that is only because I can't create souls out of nothing as he can "

' awesome there are no limits but wait he isn't god well, why do I care, if I can get my wishes I don't care who gives it to me '

"okay first I would like to be a game character"

" interesting but why kid "

' why does he keep changing that way, he calls Sora or kid or young one. he is just doing whatever he wants but he must be a couple of million years older so I can't say anything and he is powerful and doing whatever you want is his privilege. I will be like him too soon enough and will go to every world I want'

" Well because any game character has three main characteristics which are the body because it can adapt to any skills and bloodline and powers, and the mind is calm and focused as it is facing different monsters and dangers I may face after all I lived in a peaceful world and despite watching movies and anime that doesn't qualify me to fighting monsters and facing death without freezing in place"

"and the gaming interface is for me to make things simple and to get an AI assistant if possible and I want it to be Jarvis from iron man "

He looks at me shocked then laugh out loud.

"haaaaah that was awesome kid you came prepared and ready and you don't hold back when it comes to your wishes haaaaaa.h good it won't be fun any other way I am glad I choose you already boy "

I stare at him waiting for his answer about my first wish being accepted he notices that and looks at me amused and says " Okay kid granted "

I scream in my mind 'yes yes yeeeeess it's going to be awesome '

" Now boy what is your second wish "

//so this is the Auther I would like to tell the new readers that my writing gets better the more chapters you read and you will notice it and once you pass I think the 18th chapter it will become very noticeably better and keeps improving and I am reviewing the first 15 chapters again soon to fix them as best as I can for the short time I get between writing a new chapter.

and I would really appreciate that people read the whole story before writing the reviews instead of stopping at 10th or 14ht chapter and saying it's bad and giving a bad review I mean I am improving and I know the starting chapters grammar is bad but can you really judge the story as a whole based on this alone.

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