Take_the_Moon
Hello, here is the author: Title: I reincarnated as the female leader, but I want to marry the villain. Number of chapters per week: 5 + 2 extras. Number of Chapters for the novel: 100 (I always establish this goal, you can pass.) Genre: Xianxia, Female Main Character, Strong Female Character, Action, Comedy, Adventure, Cold and Distant Male Leader, and Romance. NOTE: There will be mature content and R18, but will be warned in each chapter. I hope you enjoy, as I always love to write a new world, forgive me the grammatical errors and even the mistakes regarding the Xianxia world, I accept criticism and suggestions, if they will come that I messed up or changed the information regarding the Xianxia world can comment or send message, I promise to correct. Kisses
OK I dropped this after chapter 50. I should dropped this earlier. Lot of unnecessary information, messy timeline, and plot. The author few times mixed up "she" and "he", which made me question few things. "Now XY character have a husband or a wife?? " I was skipping chapters because of the lot of unnecessary information while the characters didn't do anything and the story was not moving at all. The author jumping between past and present, confusing sometimes the readers. No hate, but this story just not my cup of tea although I read lot of transmigration and reincarnation novels, this is just a no for me.
Well...I don't know what to say other than this story is a grammatical nightmare. It's just...sigh. The premise is beautiful and I guess you can ignore the errors if you like it enough but...well. You really should work on your pronouns in particular. Just to clarify, for a woman is used /she/ and for a male /he/. Always. No exchange between the two can occour. Not only that, you also fill the chapters with unneeded info, throwing up facts left and right, making it a boring read. Is the reason why I only gave you 3 stars for world background. It's not that you did not develop it, it's just that...you didn't really fit it very well in the story. You should try to integrate your info more with the flow of the story, revealing smaller bits in more points. There is no need to dump everything on the readers at once, it only stops the flow and few people will read those added parts anyway (like i did) which is a pity. Aside from those points it's a beautiful story, I liked it. You probably should just think more about editing your chapters rather than postin them quicker, really. Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you with my comments and that instead they could be of some help to improve your writing style.
Love this story so far! I started the book and binge-read up to the currently last chapter 25, 'cause I always wanted to know what happens next. It's a story that absolutely captures you with a lot of surprising twist in the plot. Sometimes I'm worried that our MC gets silly, but luckily she's still capable.
Overall, love the idea but room for improvement. Great story, quirky charakters and a light, fun reading. Grammer errors here and there but it doesn't affect the understanding. Some chapters feel like going too fast...how to say, tmi, it just feels as if you get a bunch of things tossed at you, when it could have been paced slower, with more love for smaller details in it to feel the atmosphere without having to focus on a bunch of other equally important and interesting happenings. ATM at chapter 21
Having fun reading this. A few mistakes in grammar and quite a few situations where he/she have been switched by mistake. A bit too much info dump in every other chapter though. Exposing this much information needs to be done more sparingly. Love the characters but that system is making my head hurt. Story progression is hurting a bit from the constant irrational sidekick.
The story is good so far. Interesting plot. Only the grammar is abit confusing. Just abit but i still can understand it. I can’t comment to much im just a reader n i just read 2 chapter.. keep up the good work. Btw im a dude n kind of enjoy this kind of story. Just the original... is it really there? I mean... existed?
Very disappointed. Got past the info dump only to find further disappointment. Writing style is all over the place leading to confusion. The only reason this isn’t high on the list of “oh hell no” is bc the story didn’t manage to hold my attention long enough for it to really sink in. Good idea but execution was terrible.
The story has improved every time, although there are still errors in grammar, at least it has improved a bit. Thank you editors! 🙇🙇🙇 It has chapters with a lot of information, I think the author is in a hurry, although the last chapters have returned to normal. Being slower and softer, like at first! I'm going to change my assessment now that it already has more chapters. 😎😋 Love It! 😍😍😍