Reviews of I Somehow Became A Game Character

Has some grammar error and i think the conversation is to fast but as this is a new novel ill take considerations. I understand what your trying to point out and i like the introduction of this novel.

The chapter 1 has some error but i pretty much like the main essence of the story. I think this novel has much more space to improve on as such i would like to accompany the development of this novel.

First he must like his own before others start to like him. Awesome story. Very good. Newb writer but good content. I like it because i wrote it.

Okay, My first opinin was WOW! The begining was captivating and the story looks like it will be fun. I am looking foward to new chapters! Keep up the good work

As others have said it has some errors in it, but in the first episode alone we have our character, his backround and the story to be set on. I look foward to more chapters.