xlntz
First time writing a review, but I feel that I have to. First off the Character design is very good, the characters in the story are definitely not single-minded and are written nicely. The world background is good as well, and the only reason why I'm rating it four in this area is because there are still some things that the novel hasn't mentioned, still waiting for more information about it but so far it's really good. The story development definitely has a lot of potential and the arc with Deither was very well written to a point where I got really attached to the character. The update stability deserves five stars too by the way. I definitely recommend this novel to those who are still hesitating, you won't regret it. Although there are a few cliche's, it will not bother you because it'll feel natural and it actually helps with the story building. Overall, it's really good, you're doing great author, waiting for more updates β₯οΈ
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Chaptersssssssssssssssss Plssssssssssssssssssssss Quickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk Senddddddddddddddddddd (β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»
This novel is quite good : The writing is quite simple but effective, not useless details/descriptions but enough information to make a pleasant read, the characters are well developed and are quite "human" (Not overly righteous or those lambda villains for now), the fight scene gets better at each chapter, you can feel the improvement. The only little downside is the world/background developpement but we are still only at the 80th chapter so it may get better
Alrighty, this is a solid meh for me. The idea was pretty good, I've seen a few others that are similar but I think this one is better. However, it does have some problems. The main problem this novel has is how ridiculously slow it is. The story surrounding the first two wielders were okay, but once the main character found the third wielder it became super slow. I'm skimming the novel and I still find it excruciatingly slow. Ten or so chapters can go by and nothing really important will happen. Meaningless fights are several chapters long. Arguably the worst part is the POV changes. Theres so many problems with that. Other people's POV lasts so long. Furthermore, upon switching POV's, it will essentially just be repeating events that already happened from a different POV before continuing. Story development is meh. Story takes far too long for anything meaningful to happen. They foreshadow various things, but so far haven't capitalized on anything. As for the characters? Average at best. No matter how many skills the main character gets, it never really feels like hes improving. Side characters are meh. Theres nothing particularly interesting about any of them. The main character's students are average, if not 2d. Once again, I'd just like to point out how much exposition dumping and meaningless filler is included in this novel. Usually, most novels would stop exposition dumping at the start, but this novel never really does. It constantly re-explains stuff, to the point of it be repetitive. Overall, too slow to be enjoyable, especially considering this is a action novel. Fights are boring and almost all of them feel like filler. Everything else is average or below-average.
A great read love the concept and deither is growing on me more An more in the beginning thought it was cliche but only so many wayS yu Can have someone pick up ah weapon lol Character dEvelepoment is solid fell like im takIng this kendo journey alomg with him kEep up the work you have a supporter in me
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..................,..........................................................................................(βΰ²Έ_ΰ²Έ)β彑β»ββ»(βΰ²Έ_ΰ²Έ)β彑β»ββ»(βΰ²Έ_ΰ²Έ)β彑β»ββ»(ββΠβ)β彑β»ββ»(ββΠβ)β彑β»ββ»(ββΠβ)β彑β»ββ»(ββΠβ)β彑β»ββ»(ββΠβ)β彑β»ββ»(ββΠβ)β彑β»ββ»(ββΠβ)β彑β»ββ».........
Simply the hero finds the cart with two beautiful girls (often they have a story and the hero will help them in the future and become lovers) the important thing is that they are attacked by some people, the "smart" hero quickly determines that the attackers are the bad ones because they are men, and the girls are innocent because they are beautiful, a novel in the way Chinese perverted, cartoon heroes characters like fairy tail world childish with simple summary