Reviews of I Reincarnated as a Pokemon

Shameless self Review this is my first attempt at writing a novel if u guys have any Suggestions pls do let me know if i actually decide to keep writing this for a long time i might make a discord Server or smth like that^^

The dialogues could improve... but overall it's a nice fresh FanFic about being a Pokemon so 👍||[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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From the start when your reading it you can see the quality of the writing itd not bad but it's not good it could use some more work, and how we got off of how the MC became a pokemon was weak you start off with mc introducing himself than later his best friend then goes to the mall and dies that needs more detail into it, suddenly right after the MC dies he meets a God without any explanation then sends him to pokemon world, and more into it obviously I'm not going into this very much I'm just telling off. [ for the author ] this is by no means disrespect this story is better than most of stories please don't get angry in all I was just saying it needs improvement but not major, other tham that have a good day🙂

please don't drop it

Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

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