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Did you ever wish that a murderer to die in a horrible way? Did you ever wish that a rap*st experience the same thing he/she made others experience? This novel makes it obvious that it's not a good idea to wish for any of that. When the offender becomes the victim, you can't help but think that, well, that's not ok despite his past. Actually this is a lighthearted, funny novel so don't let my review offput you lol.
first of all, should I call the police? seriously, the main character has a bad personality. "yes, besides a lolicon, I'm an assumed otaku, and since I didn't do anything at home and watch lolicon hentai's" well, in this line you have to fix it. because it sounds like trash. (MC) Alright, let's get back to the main topic. so far the story is quite interesting (if you ignore the beginning of the story)
Honestly? The MC is a bit mentally retarded. There's also the lack of empathy for her first murder. We're led to believe that the MC is a downtrodden otaku living a day to day existence but when she instantly murders the maid and barely flinches? That is some messed up stuff man. Otaku? nope. That's a psycho mike myers right there. As for the mentally retarded part? Well she has immense magical powers that don't seem to have any limits. Now what's the problem with that you ask? Well there isn't a problem with that, not at all. The problem is that there's a multitude of situations or "Forced Plot" that could easily be solved with her magical powers but "Hurr Durr" I could easily solve my problems with my magic powers right now but uhh.. what's magic? MC's magic powers are conveniently forgotten during the forced plot sequences which is bad. This problem isn't the overpowered magic but the writing itself. It's not all bad though, grammar is good and the story is on the level of the average japanese light novel.
a cute story about a guy who is transferred to another world don't worry about the gender bender tag there's no mention of anything sexual related until chapter 50. You don't even learn her age till past 30 thirteen or so. The concepts are brilliant while the story is told in a very simple manner. This story is almost completely innocent.
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Writing messy, at least at start. Mc is idiot, when he can cast some meteor or other crazy spell he just make faces and knoked out =/ mc power level is all over the place, at one moment he goes to sleep, coz he tired, even without saying to his maid vital info(like damn plot to kill him) then awakens tied and ready to be killed, next moment he can go like week with no need for sleep, then again he tired and need sleep. One moment mc kills some mobs with magic like a boss, next chapter cant do crap against humans =/ and there many points like this, one moment he kill, next moment goes crap like oh its young guard he has all his life ahead, and oh all castle guarded by 15 yo so cant kill anyone or just destroy whole thing. Summary: its bad read
• I like this Novel pretty much just the Creator's native isn't English so he/she messed up in grammar. • MC is different than in other novels main's that makes her "MC" different but good, she's like a phycho Loli with cautious personality not like certain someone as in "Cautious Hero" XDD. • MC'S background is a complete mess hope Creator do something about it like explaining will be much better in his/her future chapters. • Story isn't developing at all if I may be honest it's like Creator doesn't know what to add next so he/she's only stretching the same story over and over and maintaining chapter stability to daily upload currently. • Overall i hope Creator give some thoughts about this if they saw this any time. That's it, thx for reading my review heh~!!