silentpassenger90
The previous 1start revies did a sh.itty job reading this novel... The thruth is that this HP fanfic is quite good... it you blank out some of the mature profanities(which are also good placement), this novel is good... I look forward how much the MC develop... ... this is really a refreshing one... Author state that there will be no romance.. which is good. (30yo soul in 11yo body) Dumbledor, I would place him in senile, manipulative, for the greater good character... and MC is not taking his s.hit.
Did the author think making his story with vulgarity every two words make it funny or more realistic ? If so,then you got it wrong,this story seems to be written be a teenager. The MC seems a little dumb,that was probably done on purpose (I hope),the vulgarities and way of thinking make it horrible to read,well,at least the fact that the mc is a soldier and dumb make it a little realistic maybe. I don't want to read more because you can't make a mc like this grow or evolve. Even if you success,it will be so forceful it will ruin the already trash story.
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