Windreader8675
The main character's anguishes at the beginning are very relatable, which contributes to the reader developing a sense of empathy with Xun Ying. Besides her irreverent way of being makes for some pretty interesting comedy. But for me what really distinguishes this novel from others is the idea of having a system with such a human personality. I don't know if it's original, but I had never seen this before.
Really interesting novel, am quite invested in this story now~ XD The use of a system but with a cute persona is charming, Bao Bao sounds adorable. Author inserts did feel a little weird to me, but author san makes it work really well in the plot. Pacing: Really good pacing, not too fast and not too slow. Setting: I like the use of both Eastern and Western influences in this novel, it makes it refreshing to read. Keep up the awesome writing! Can't wait to read more. ^.^
Okay, one word before I start the real review, this novel is FUNNY as hell! I don't recommend reading it while using your brain, just toss that out the window and your good! This novel literally breaks the 4th wall, actually no, it breaks every kind of wall possible! The MC is literally OP just based on the fact she's still an infant and going around doing **** 10K year old cultivators doing after only a few days after birth and the fact that the author even said she has a thick-ass Plot-armor. The grammar is a little iffy, but this could be because the author's main language isn't English? This is a good read if you want a good laugh. The author uses a lot of chinese humor, but it's a relief the author explains it. However, I think it'd do the story good if perhaps the author's notes and explanations were strictly at the end of the novel?