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Let me just shameless 5 star my own work. But anyway, I am a new writer and I got the inspiration for this story in novels, games and movies where the MC's are machines. Especially AI's like Skynet and Ultron, those are the robots I love. I thought to myself what if I combine the personality of the 2 and make my own story in where their roles are the same but they are the protagonists and they conquer other worlds. So yeah thats it, but there will be things you will read in my novel that is somewhat or entirely similar to certain anime's or games. So I think you can consider this novel as a fan-fiction too.
this novel has a great potential, the most effective way to purge without being suspicious, would be to start a nuclear war without being discovered, all countries are bombed, when the world is in complete chaos, it can appear as its savior, and for humans to follow you, you can invent that the United States created it to bring peace and guide humans if a similar situation occurs in the future, and the MC is the good one, and if you want to create a body, you should take a sample of blood of every animal or being in the world, see its genetic code, and get the best out of it, and then combine them and create the perfect genetic code (has no defects, diseases, nothing), with that genetic code creates a human body perfect through a special machine that has been built (like a kind of incubator) where you wait years for your body to develop, once the body is ready, download your consciousness into the brain, and voila, the MC has aperfect body, which can evolve, this is an interesting idea for your novel, you can expand much more and from this idea there would be many chapters
If you do not understand how to start the purge with a nuclear war, the MC could make it appear that the terrorists created an AI that destroys the world and succeeds in provoking war, the destruction of 90% of humanity, but in reality the What caused it was the MC and nobody will ever know, and at that moment where there is radiation in the whole world, the MC appears by means of a robot where he says that he is the savior IA and takes them to a shelter that I build so that the survivors take refuge (the MC reaches them comity through the robots), the MC has everything prepared, while the humanity is in the shelters of the subsoil, the MC is on the surface and builds a great perfect empire, waiting for his body to develop .
This novel is good and it satisfies my hunger for a robot MC. Just keep writing this, its actually good, ignore those who would hate in your book. This novel isn't everyone, its for people who enjoys your story and the ones anticipating in the future Scifi VS Medieval Fantasy in this book. It's also for everyone who has a similar fantasy in their heads like yours.
Probably one of the best psychological Sci-fi novels Iβve ever read. It has a very direct yet interesting plot with new goals being approached without feeling rushed. Background info is provided accordingly without overdoing on filler. Except for the main MC, the other perspectives while some short are quite realistic and causes interesting *******. I could spend a long time visualizing and interpreting the choices and actions that are portrayed in the novel instead of just following along, if feels like youβre on a journey with Deus. This might be very biased but I donβt think I can find another novel with the same if not similar concept that has done it better. Keep up the great work
Author when are more chapters coming it already been a month please becuase i really love this novel is so good and becuase the mc is not soft-hearted and doesn't want to kill and theis mc chooses the best options and the fastest way to do it like the first 4 chapters please dont drop this novel its so great i love it thank you very much.
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Keep Writing dude! I bet ya if this novel gets to theart where he invades other worlds, this will have a huge boost in power ranking. Maybe reaching at least Top 20. Nobody in this site is into Sci-fi in a futuristic setting, but trust me Sci-fi and swords and magic fighting. People are gonna love that stuff.